black butterfly - chapter four: corrupted youth

[shizukanai]

title black butterfly
pairing yunho/jaejoong
rating nc-17
genre au,dark,angst,drama,romance
warning prostitute!jaejoong,hinted!sexual intercourse with several other partners on jaejoong's side
summary After allowing for his best friends to drag him into a club people their age were surely not allowed to enter under normal circumstaces,17 years old

Comments

[jaan30]

Aww, poor Yunho, Hero is so harsh with his "customers" lol but I don't really blame him. Still I wonder how Yunho will ever manage to get closer to Jaejoong since he's being shut out so completely at the moment. Jaejoong is really sweet with his sister though, so we know his coldness is just a front for his Hero persona. Also, it seems Jae has quite the past hmm? We shall see... so many questions lol thanks for the update!😘

[fyunjae]

Yayyyyyyyyyyyy for update!!!! \O/. Awwwww yunho has fallen so deep. Poor him :/. I think the harsh words from hero is necessary. Got to get yunho's head screw on straight. I was biting my nails afraid Jessica would have a crush on yunho. That will b complicated XD. I kinda like how jae is still nonchalant about yunho. Usually writers will go too fast and have jae fallen for yunho's innocence uncharacteristically, well fast. And omg what's the deal with this Lee jinki. I guess jae has a deep dark past. Looking forward to your update on this story!!!

[sunhineonu]

When ever I read this kind of stories prostitute jae and student yunho .they remind me of this sad story of yunjae called nightingale ..
I loved it when yunho asked time to move on..it is true.u can't just suddenly move on from ur crush

[jaan30]

Omg nightingale was heartbreaking T.T

[sunhineonu]

yes i want to smack jae hard everytime i read it..
hope black butterfly has happy ending(hint cough hint)

[jaan30]

It's Yunho's mom I want to smack lol but yeah, even the ending was sad because of all the lost time and Yunho almost died from being out of his mind with grief *sigh* the worst part was it was all for nothing! so much needless suffering *sigh* ugh I need to find some fluff now lol

[borntoloveyou24]

Cant wait for the next chapter...ur really awesome and i like the way u write a story....keep it up!!!😊😊

[shinchul303]

Have reread and caught up again.

I love this story. There's so much going on beneath the surface.