[Fanfiction] A Beautiful Mind

[shizuyume]

A Beautiful Mind
Author: shizuyuki (@ shizuyume)
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Neji x Tenten
Rating: G
For 30_romances's 27th theme - Garden Vista ; Elysium El Dorado

Comments

[anonymous]

This was really good! I hope you'll write more NejiTen soon!

[shizuyume]

Thank you, whoever you are ^__^ There are 29 more to go.

[dreamsofbluesky]

Damn. I really like it ^_^ Tenten is written so well -

'Yet even at that tender age Tenten was a determined, undistracted kunoichi, and she walked off unruffled, returning to where she had begun her own practice.'

YESH! It's refreshing reading about Tenten not completely bowed down by Neji-worship.

Very nice idea, very prettily written. I like how you've taken a short moment in their history and imbued it with meaning. I loved the last few paragraphs especially - Neji's subtle immaturity (because he's still a BOY despite his being a genius and all that jazz XD) - the imagery of him spinning the kunai and how you described it - his thoughts about Tenten and her effect on him in the last few lines - everything, really. Great work =] *adds to memories*

[shizuyume]

Thank you very much for reading! I appreciate it very much ^___^

[blooming_cosmo]

*behind* I read this a while ago, just never had a chance to comment. This was so lovely. I really like how you wrote both characters in this one. So wonderful seeing the relationship written with neither bending or breaking at the other's will. XD Makes room for a lot of learning instead of 'hahaha I'm better than you111!!!!!'

I can't wait for the others. Whee!

[shizuyume]

Thank you, ahaha XD I'll probably finish this entire claim in.. ten years or something.