Fic: Anxiety

[shmobeline]

Title: Anxiety
Series: Prince of Persia
Characters: Tamina-centric, Dastan, Tus, Nizam
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~450
Disclaimer: I own neither Prince of Persia nor the characters used in this fic, it's just a bit of fun.
Summary: The moment Dastan kills himself to convince Tus of the power of the dagger, from Tamina's point of view.
A/N: Apologies for

Comments

[shmobeline]

Thank you! I was watching that scene the second time I saw the movie thinking that Tamina must've been freaking out, having to watch Dastan stab himself. Can't be something nice to witness. :P

Sokka cracks me up. :D

[hope_assassin]

Wow, this is absolutely amazing! I loved it! And I feel so ashamed of myself for not realizing that she did watch him die once as well.

You did a brilliant job of portraying the feelings she must've experienced while watching him kill himself. Brilliant work with this! You style is quite lovely and I'd look very much forward to seeing more on this fandom from you.

Memming for awesomeness~

P.S. Your Lilly, Kushina and Minato icons rule.

[shmobeline]

Thank you very much! People really were dying all over the place in that movie, hehe. All these compliments, I don't know what to say except thank you! I look forward to writing more for the fandom. :)

And thanks, I love Kushina and Minato. :3 But how did you guess that was Lily?

[hope_assassin]

Yeah, indeed. :33 You did such an awesome job of portraying it, really. So many folks dying indeed. D: Scary. Dx

I do too - they're amazing. :333 I thought it was her since I recognized the uniform, and I might have seen that icon before, but my suspicions were confirmed when I checked all your userpics. ;D

[shmobeline]

Ah, okay. Lily and James are my HP OTP, and I love the Minato/Kushina pairing, too. I clearly have a thing for young parents who die tragically, haha. For whatever reason, I always seem to be much more interested in the parents of the main character than I am in the main character, hehe.

[liminalliz]

Ooooh, this was lovely! I enjoyed this detailing of a lost moment in time, and quite a horrific moment for the princess! Nice job!

[shmobeline]

Thanks muchly! I'm glad you liked it. :)

All the way through the movie, I wanted to refer to Tamina as a tarkheena, hehe. The Horse and His Boy FTW.

[ed_84]

This is lovely, with great characterization!

I especially loved this line: Nothing had prepared her for the sight of Dastan - young, noble, trusting Dastan - laying lifeless on the polished marble, his legs twisted awkwardly, blood seeping from his self-inflicted wound.

[shmobeline]

Oh, thank you! I always worry about characterisation. I'm glad to know I pulled it off.

[thisisagift]

So good! Ive been lookg for some POP fanfiction. I love that you wrote about this scene, i thought Tamina would be upset.

Also, you have awesome quotes at the side there. (10 things, empire records,pushing daisies, life on mars AND Dylan Moran. wow. Love them :))

[shmobeline]

Thank you! I really only thought of Tamina the second time I was watching it. (The first time I was kind of preoccupied with, 'Holy crap! He just stabbed himself! That's committment...')

And thanks. I love quotes. I've got them... well, pretty much everywhere. I used to scrawl them all over my school books, too, hehe.