king & lionheart iv/iv

Mar 05, 2013 18:24

part iv )

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msunfinished March 6 2013, 17:18:54 UTC

So i read this after it's done & it's like my heart is shattered and put back again and shattered again
I felt sehun's raging when jongin with soojung. Like seriously, out of breath angry while holding my phone.
Then calmed down when jongin finally come to his sense. And ugly sobbing when they have to die together like this even though the enemy is mighty yifan.
It built a lot of feelings that makes me in denial that i love this . But i do .
And oh oh ! I even thought some plot twist, like jongin is the one who is going to kill sehun or it was only their kingdom's sidekick sightings so that i dont have to go through that beautiful endings that going to make me cry .
.... Hmmm and ... How about a squeakel, next life squeakel, jongin trying to find sehun squeakel lol !
Nvm
Love it
Thanks

Idk what i typed about.

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shoemin March 7 2013, 05:56:00 UTC
omg sorry for making you go through all of those emotions while reading this!!!
at least sekai was together in the end, right, that's all that matters
and cries i don't know i doubt a sequel will happen ; ;
but thank you for reading and commenting!!! ♥

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shoemin March 7 2013, 05:57:30 UTC
at least they died together ; ; and thank you for your kind words, i'm really glad you liked this!!! i couldn't resist the angst though :( and no thank you for enjoying this and leaving such nice things!!! ♥

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poppy_sky March 7 2013, 02:52:10 UTC
See all those little bleeding pieces on the floor? Well, that's my heart. I swear a flying ax would've made less mess....

no but seriously this was lovely, let me love you down ♥

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shoemin March 7 2013, 05:59:23 UTC
wow omg i'm sorry about that ; ;
and sobs thank you so much for your very kind words /loves on ♥

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nhiphuong March 7 2013, 03:27:24 UTC
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i cant gather my feels to make a proper comment rn just adasdhaksdjkajshdajksdaskdaksd

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shoemin March 7 2013, 06:01:47 UTC
shhhh it's ok i understand ilu ty for reading ♥

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hipployta March 7 2013, 03:53:39 UTC
I was going to have a South Park moment like, "You Killed Sekai...YOU BASTARD!" but...Zitao killed Sekai...on Yifan's orders no less...that's tough. Maknaes killing maknaes and what not...on the orders of EXO's BigBrother!Kris

Sad...

Jongstal were cute though...Jessica already knowing the outcome but letting them have their time is sad too

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shoemin March 7 2013, 06:03:16 UTC
i'm sorry for making zitao and yifan the ~bad guys~ but i think they fit the role well idk ; ;
and yes i'm glad that you noticed that little detail of jessica knowing the outcome!! i didn't think anyone would tbh
thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥

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