sweet lime and lemon sour (2/4) author's note
Author's Note
Dear readers,
As usual, I don't own Barry Allen (aka the Flash) or Wally West (aka Kid Flash), because they belong to DC Comics. With that said, I really want to talk.
Did anyone find this funny? Any of it? Being the one who had to write it, I giggled and laughed at the cheesy pick up lines whenever I read it over. At the same time, I want to bang my head. I can't believe I wrote Wally that way. Was he always this cute? I mean, I guess my version of Wally is pretty adorable when I think about it.
I enjoy his insecurity and anxiety. He is always so unsure and careful of what he does. He doesn't want to disappoint Barry, but also he doesn't want to get himself hurt either. It makes Wally seem so fragile, when compared to Barry.
Since Wally is the one, who is dreaming about Barry and him, it really depends on how I want to write Wally. In the first part, Barry was the one in control of the situation, and Wally let him. Well, until he is totally sure that he has feelings for his uncle. This sort of affects his subconscious, resulting Wally taking more control of the dream and what he wants out of it. Which is what you see in part two, somewhat, with Wally taking partial control.
Really, when I first started writing this, I already had which pick up line I wanted to use. To be honest, just writing this, I always saw it as Wally saying it unconsciously. He wasn't literally trying to hit on Barry, but because he's a flirt and he loves talking to his uncle about science. It's kind of like, let's combine the two together!
I always found it hard to write romantic scenes, seriously! It has to be like perfect, while everything else just has to flow decently. And really, what anticipates me the most the romantic parts of the story, because I'm a die hard romantic. Most of the time I just want to skip everything else and start writing the good stuff. But that doesn't work, not with me anyways, I need to lead it up to those moments.
It makes me sad, so sad. And then there are times I want to write smut, but I don't want to rush the story. Remember that part where Barry says that line, where he sounds hot and desperate? At that point, I just want to drop everything in mind and have Wally lose his dream virginity right there and then! But then again, I have more self control, and I didn't want to mess with my readers like that.
I seriously need to make myself a piece where I can write all the porn I want. Really. Oh and that part of the sudden vibration that makes the fifteen year old climax? I was trying to hint that it was Barry, who had gave him a hand. I'm not sure if everyone caught that, since it's so easy to miss, and nobody has yet to mention it.
Barry's just that fast, is my excuse. Or explanation.
Anyways I must run along now,
Dr. Nguyen