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Bones Fic: the luck I've had (can make a good man turn bad) 1/1

Sep 13, 2009 22:40

It was inevitable really...

Title: the luck I've had (can make a good man turn bad)
Author:shootingstars88
Rating: K
Disclaimer: All characters are property of HH et al, no copyright infringement intended.
Timeline: s3 finale.
Summary: "What the hell Bones? I'm in my house, in my bathroom, in my bathtub!" A little Booth POV and a missing scene for The Pain in the ( Read more... )

booth/brennan, fic, bones

Comments 17

buffyangellvr23 September 14 2009, 03:49:06 UTC

nice work...very them.
And the visuals are an added bonus lol

shootingstars88 September 14 2009, 18:32:33 UTC

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed :)

0penhearts September 14 2009, 09:14:56 UTC

Lovely job! You definitely don't sound like a newbie :) Can't wait to read more! Welcome to the fandom :)

shootingstars88 September 14 2009, 18:31:33 UTC

You definitely don't sound like a newbie :) That's pretty much the best thing you could say to me. Jumping into a new fandom is always a bit scary so it's nice to be well-received. Thanks for the welcome, I think I'm going to like this fandom.

hpaich September 14 2009, 16:31:24 UTC

Thank you SO MUCH for this lovely piece. Even though it is written from Booth's point of view, through his eyes we see just how much has been taken from Brennan. And it hurts. A lot.

Wonderfully, exquisitely descriptive, with a great insight into Booth's thought process. I also like that you continued the scene. I always thought that there must have been something like this that happened. At the end she has clearly forgiven him, but we are left to assume she just 'did'. This makes so much more sense, and gives us the resolution we need so badly.

Sorry for the lengthy review, but I think you did a fabulous job, and now I want more from you. See? Now the pressure is on! HAHA...

shootingstars88 September 14 2009, 18:35:05 UTC

Hey don't ever apologise for a lengthy review :)

It's always a bit nerve-wracking posting fic for a new fandom so I'm really glad to see that you enjoyed it, and that most importantly you felt it connected with the characters.

As for seeing more from me, that's probably inevitable. This show has gotten under my skin lately and I'm sure s5 will push me into writing more fic.

melroseee September 15 2009, 04:48:40 UTC

This was simply amazing. PLEASE write more soon?? :)

tempertemper September 16 2009, 14:32:48 UTC

This was gorgeous! Recced to me by my good friend spacekid77.

You have them very well captured - welcome to writing Bones fic, I hope you'll write more!