hmm, i spot a few splashes of brilliant details here and there, but not constant enough to make its full impact,and that's quite a pity, coz it would be much better if you make their appearances constant^^'
huhu, okay, mianeee!! i can't help but to say that out, coz that's the first thing i noticed, shori-chan <3
but bravo for this, i don't think i could ever work a magick genre and make it seem real, i sucked at fantasy/fairytales/magic realm. that's my weakness. and this is believeable, with a little more desriptions of the realm worked in, you could really make this shine,bb-ah. *claps* ^^
OMO Thank you!! It's a good thing when people point out things that need to be changed! I'll see if I can do more with this I tend to get lazy, and it's hard for me to go back to a fic and work on it again! But I shall try!!
I love fantasy stuff, I read alot of books on Vampires/werewolves and the fey...so I thought I'd try! Thank you again bb!!! <3
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huhu, okay, mianeee!! i can't help but to say that out, coz that's the first thing i noticed, shori-chan <3
but bravo for this, i don't think i could ever work a magick genre and make it seem real, i sucked at fantasy/fairytales/magic realm. that's my weakness. and this is believeable, with a little more desriptions of the realm worked in, you could really make this shine,bb-ah. *claps* ^^
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It's a good thing when people point out things that need to be changed!
I'll see if I can do more with this
I tend to get lazy, and it's hard for me to go back to a fic and work on it again!
But I shall try!!
I love fantasy stuff, I read alot of books on Vampires/werewolves and the fey...so I thought I'd try!
Thank you again bb!!!
<3
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