(fic: ncis) proof of

Jul 18, 2009 19:14

Title: Proof Of
Author: chatona
Fandom: NCIS
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Rating: R
Warnings: unbeta'd
Word count: 379
Summary: Some nights, Gibbs plays connect-the-dots with the scars on Tony's body.

*ncis, ~l. j. gibbs, !fiction, ~tony dinozzo

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chatona July 18 2009, 17:35:40 UTC
That came from. Uh. I don't know? I had this thought of playing connect-the-dots with freckles only Tony doesn't have any so I threw that idea out of the window and then BF sat down next to me and I had my hand on his leg and thought about bruises (asldkjas not that I would leave any, uhm, but well. thoughts cross my mind, y'know.) and then I opened a document and started writing and then at some point I had this and uh, yeah. Then I posted it. And there it is. And I'm glad you like it. And I'm not babbling at all, no. I wrote that after the elephants fucking each other. But heh.

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chatona July 18 2009, 18:27:17 UTC
Hehe, I'm sure they can be. Oh Lu, I'm turning out to be a little less vanilla than I always thought I was. Still pretty damn vanilla, mind you, but less than I thought.

My other thought was playing connect-the-dots with moles, but that didn't strike me as quite as sexy or cute or funny. The BF kisses me on the nose and it makes me feel all giddy and gleeful and when he kisses me on my forehead and it makes me feel all loved, so I thought Gibbs could do all these things on purpose and have it mean what it makes me feel and. Yes.

Wow, this story is kind of autobiographical, huh?

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prettyhairs July 19 2009, 03:24:15 UTC
Gorgeous=)

(It's too hot here for a sensible comment)

*loves you*

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chatona July 19 2009, 08:11:26 UTC


I wish it was hot here. I'm cold. It's summer and I'm cold. This is not the way things are supposed to be. *loves back*

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prettyhairs July 19 2009, 16:18:00 UTC
♥♥♥

I really love the heat but the humidity? I do not like it when rivulets of sweat run down my face while I'm doing nothing;)

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chatona July 19 2009, 21:22:43 UTC
Humidity is evil. I had a lovely chat with a friend of my Cambodian housemate the other day. Said friend is from somewhere near the equator and he says "well, at home it's 40 to 50°C in the shade, but at least it's dry heat and there's always a bit of wind. Here? 30°C and I'm dying from the humidity. This sucks."

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chatona August 5 2009, 16:34:03 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for commenting!

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manaie August 5 2009, 16:18:47 UTC
Hmm- *wonders how she can bottle this up to keep it forever* haha- that's a creepy image. ♥

Ahaha, i really love the whole repeated beginnings of the paragraphs and how different each one is to each other.

And now I'm off to sleep with this in my head.XDD

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chatona August 5 2009, 16:33:38 UTC
Sleep well! ♥ And hey, if I knew how to bottle fics, I would totally start a business. Except that would end in copy right issues and whatnot, but. Yeah.

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manaie August 7 2009, 10:38:22 UTC
..... the black market my darling, where copyright isn't an issue. XDD

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chatona August 7 2009, 12:32:46 UTC
I might get rich!

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ferneberga August 5 2009, 16:56:42 UTC
very poignant, got me sniffling there - thanks

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chatona August 5 2009, 16:57:56 UTC
I hope those are good sniffles ♥

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ferneberga August 5 2009, 17:06:19 UTC
very much so, sniffles as in soppy sappy sniffles when you read a Mills & Boone Romance, all sugary and spice and all things nice - coz this for Gibbs is that and yet so very gothic at his worry/concern/jealousy when others seem to get too close to the love of his life - and well maybe I'm reading more into what you wrote than you actually wrote, and I'm doing an imitation Abby with this babbly-rambling way I'm explaining things....

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chatona August 5 2009, 18:21:26 UTC
Heeeey, there's nothing wrong at all with rambling and babbling (I am rather prone to those two as well sometimes, ladida) and oh, romance-induced sniffles are indeed the good kind :D

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