Split Screen.

[shortfuseburnig]

She sits alone, knees tucked to her chest

Comments

[troutsavedmylyf]

First, a round of applause. Take a moment and give yourself a nice pat on the back. You kept your word and finished it by the (extended) weekend

[shortfuseburnig]

Pat, pat. You get one too. Because you totally understood every aspect of that poem.

So....pat. Pat. That one was for good measure.

Every time I read it, I like it a little bit more. I was frustrated with it at first, but I've settled with it, and begun to kind of love it.

And I understand the criticism about my punctuation. Usually I pay so much attention to it, but the words were so important to me here that I couldn't even try to focus on those parts. I will definitely take that into consideration though.

I'm glad you read it.

;( Is that one crying? Or maybe there's something stuck in it's eye, and that's why it's sad.
Maybe we'll never know.

:P

[shortfuseburnig]

Oh, and here's the thing I love about poetry.

How you can find so much beauty in something so sad.
It's almost like therapy.

Just had to add that.

[troutsavedmylyf]

Hah, yeah, that's a familiar feeling. What you said after the pats, that is. That "settling," then the following deep connection with a piece of writing.

;(

Hahaha... I do think it has something it it's eye. Almost positive. Hah.

Your comment on beauty in sadness fits well with my current Poe reading.

[starxsatellite]

Loveeeeeee it. :)

and you. duhhh. you should ummm write more. thanks!

[shortfuseburnig]

Haha, thanks :) Now I have two superfans! :P

That's almost enough for a superfan club...

I'm just kidding.

Love you too - see you later on tonight. Baby.

Haha. I'm really tired and delirious this morning. As I often am.

<3