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shortfuseburnig

Assignment for Seerman's class/ Civil War poem for Squillace

Mar 10, 2008 20:11

Behind the curtain not where i belong i belong in the light i need to be thrust into the blinding light where all the eyes are on me being somebody else feeling somebody else feeling what they feel saying what they think making everybody happy at once when at once nobody is happy as they say they are keeping everything inside inside their heads ( Read more... )

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troutsavedmylyf March 11 2008, 02:37:53 UTC

Hah, I don't think they are "laughable." I thought they were interesting, actually. So don't be so hard on your former self.

;P

shortfuseburnig March 11 2008, 14:21:56 UTC

Every time I come back and read them over again, I like them a little bit more. So now I can agree and say that they are pretty interesting - I liked how broad my writing style was, and those were probably the rarest styles I used then or now. They reminded me to be more creative, which I think I needed.

They also helped me realize how many words I can type per minute. Haha. I don't have the internet on my old laptop, so I sat and re-typed everything onto the laptop at the apartment. The first one was especially fun to copy. :P

<3

sexualcoco87 March 11 2008, 13:08:22 UTC

NO I DO NOT REMEMBER! and i would apperciate it you post it. I do remember it was very funny, because ur a quite a funny person. You could always make me laugh....

I think we're best friends cause we were once lovers....hey dont laugh, its very possible!

ANyways ummmm

That last one about war.WOW im sur eit had to do with a book we read, but I really like that one brit. It could totally be of curent times and the war in Irag, it reminds me of a political song type deal. I really love that one. And the one at top...I like the idea of it. Its some of the characters u played right?
ANyways I love you see you in T-two days!

sexualcoco87 March 11 2008, 13:09:19 UTC

Note: The war in Irag, is different from the war in Iraq

shortfuseburnig March 11 2008, 14:16:26 UTC

Thanks for clearing that up, because I was ready to make fun of you for misspelling Iraq. Anyway, what's up in Irag?

We totally hooked up in a past life. That's how you know me better than I know myself. Because you used to be all... on me. :P I bet it was magnificent.

I've probably written you a few poems over time, and written one or two about you, but the only one I could find was that one you asked me to write about you and Drew...something about sailing and lasting love. GOD I was a sap.

<3
I reserved tickets for us at SCCC on Sunday afternoon to see the college play...there's one spot left, too. Hmm.

sexualcoco87 March 11 2008, 21:43:32 UTC

ew! I asked u to write me a poem about Drew and i? Gag! I do NOT want to see that. Im sure its beautiful but no thanks!

I could have sworn u wrote me a funny one, one time. I thought u wrote it before we graduated. Hmmmm...

As for being magnificent in bed....enh you were AIIITEEE. lol j/k Im sure u were an animal with me.

Irag, o man u dont wanna go there right now. It worse than Iraq.

Dont forget I might not be able to go on Sunday, I dont know what my work schedule is yet! But i will let you know Friday. Dont forget friday night we're going to see my lil sisters musical. My moms coming and she wants to see you, so now u HAVE to go. Or she might not love you anymore.

<333 loving you ........is easy