Kung Fu Swimmers

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I dropped them at opposite ends of the arena. They stared at each other with their Japanese eyes. The one dressed in blue, Emerson, moved only slightly, but the one dressed in orange, Vincent, didn't move at all. Suddenly, Emerson attacked. Emerson was faster and whacked Vincent with his gigantic tail. Vincent was dazed from the attack. He

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[shortyvs]

I really like this one. It was an assignment for my junior year English teacher, Fr. O'Konsky, S.J. He is big on descriptions and adjectives. "Show, don't tell," was his motto. Needless to say, I got an "A".