Deja Vu Part 4/5

Apr 28, 2008 11:09

 
Another fic for my ‘table’. The prompt is ‘familiarity’.

Rated: T

Disclaimer: I don't own the O.C. characters or actors. This is a work of fiction and not meant to infringe on any copyrights.

Summary: It’s September in Berkeley, California; Ryan encounters someone from his past that will turn his freshman year upside down.
Unbetaed: (Because I don’t ( Read more... )

berkeley!ryan, table, deja vu, familiarity, part 4

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shouldsleep April 29 2008, 00:22:46 UTC
Thanks for reading. I just put this under a cut. I posted this five minutes before I had to leave for work, naturally the computer froze when I tried to do an LJ cut- but now 5 hours later it is done. :)

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chrisear April 28 2008, 18:59:52 UTC
what is Kirsten doing with raisins?

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shouldsleep April 29 2008, 00:23:18 UTC
Part 5 will explain.

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yessi_5 April 28 2008, 19:03:12 UTC
I've been a bit lazy with the commenting lately, but I read every bit of this:

Kirsten was sitting on the bed, an economy size bag of raisins in her lap, Luke was there too- standing over a guy tied to my computer chair, a gag covering his mouth to muffle any screaming.

Uhm, huh? I was ready for a lot of things after Ryan opened the door, but Kirsten, Luke, a computer chair and raisins?

Colour me intrigued!

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shouldsleep April 29 2008, 00:24:41 UTC
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're intrigued. Part five should answer your questions.

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katwoman76 April 28 2008, 19:55:59 UTC
Yay for Luke!!!
Wonderful update, but you might want to check your lj-cut.

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shouldsleep April 29 2008, 00:26:10 UTC
Thanks. Yeah, I just put it under a cut, I was having computer problems earlier before I left for work (why does it always happen when I'm in a hurry?)

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jassylou April 28 2008, 21:04:51 UTC
LOL!!! I'm loving this am I supposed to be finding it funny?,or is just my weird sense of humour?.

The last paragraph really cracked me up!! LOL.
Trust Luke to go "over the top".Even funnier was Kirsten sitting there with a bag of raisins watching the Oliver show.

I hope I've not offended you or anyone else by finding it funny?. I'm totally invested.It's a brilliant story and wonderfully written.I don't want it to end.I suppose it must considering that it is so well rounded and primed for an exciting ending.

Thanks for writing and sharing. mwah

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shouldsleep April 29 2008, 00:30:06 UTC
I wouldn't classify it as a comedic fic, but I smirked a bit writing certain parts. I always thought canon was kind of funny due to the constant drama and overreaction by the characters. Totally not offended to have amused you, thanks for reading!

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