Deja vu: Epilogue

[shouldsleep]

I know, I know… this didn’t get written much faster than last time. Sorry to leave you hanging, hopefully it was worth the wait.

Rated: T

Disclaimer: I don't own the O.C. characters or actors. This is a work of fiction and not meant to infringe on any copyrights.

Summary: It’s September in Berkeley, California; Ryan encounters someone from his past

Comments

[jassylou]

Just awww and just enough Taylor.Maybe oneday we'll get to visit this universe again*nudge*

Awe fic shouldsleep Thanks Hugs,

[shouldsleep]

Thanks for reading; I truly appreciate your loyal reviews. I'm not sure about a return to this universe, but I'm thinking of maybe another sequel/part to 'Still Time'.

[jonsmom14]

Ok, I didn't realize that Oliver bit Ryan's finger off. That was a bit of a nasty surprise - but it made more sense for the ambulance that way. I liked this story even though I hate Oliver - although I liked what happened to Oliver. Great job.

[shouldsleep]

I couldn't let Ryan come away completely unscathed, but at least it was only half of a finger. The ambulance was meant for Oliver, but he was being a faker so it came in handy for Ryan.

[muchtvs]

Lots of really beautifully written lines in this chapter:

Sandy hasn’t moved; he isn’t taking the night off.

Sometimes I need things to be spelled out.

She says she doesn’t come just for me.

Sophie loves birds. At first she just looked up at them soaring overhead with a puzzled look on her face, as if trying to understand the mechanics of flight. (Genius idea on the birdfeeder by the way...and love Sandy helping, lining up the tools, etc... hee.)

and I hope that the saying is true and this is how we’ll spend the next year, and every year after that.

And a bit of the funny, with Seth's shrine. I love Seth.

Anyway, you have such a poetic flow to your writing. I reread lines sometimes, to make sure I get the full meaning of them and to appreciate your combination of words. Your efforts are appreciated.

Wonderfully upbeat, promising ending.

Nice Job.

[shouldsleep]

It's interesting and gratifying to learn what lines were favourites. It can only improve my writing in the future.

Thank you for reading!

[beachtree]

I was just thinking about this, so I'm really happy to see more. I'm adding it to my "must read" list- hopefully for tomorrow.

[fifimom]

"Like it? Hate it?"
Love it, thanks for writing it.

[shouldsleep]

Thanks for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed.