Camp Mendinghell Part 2/?

[shouldsleep]

Camp Mendinghell (temporary name for AU fic) Part 2/?

Rated: T
Disclaimer: I don't own the O.C. characters or actors. This is a work of fiction and not meant to infringe on any copyrights.
Summary: This is an AU in which Ryan meets the Newport kids at a tough love wilderness camp.

AN: Again there are probably numerous errors because I wrote this

Comments

[katwoman76]

And now you add Oliver to make the trip even worse for them?
Poor guys.

And since even at a ToughLove-Camp AJ probably can't get too physical with the rich kids to avoid suiing, I guess he will use Ryan as his outlet a lot. Just like with that first attack on that day.

[shouldsleep]

Two villains is better than one! Thanks for reading.

[kazfloyd]

OMG, now you add Oliver to the mix too. LOL. This is getting interesting.

[shouldsleep]

:)

[jassylou]

OMG! What a dilemma Ryans in now,as if "f..k'n AJ with the spade handle isn't enough.

He's now got "Mad Man" of the woods Trask to survive against.
Oliver will definitely in true to form fashion start stalking one of the girls. I think Ryan will have laid Taylor *nods*)and then "The Trask" will start his maniacal ways.

You got me!! I definitely wasn't expecting Oliver although him and AJ are made for one another.*nudge,slash.man rape*

Great,enjoyable writing and no mistakes that I could see.

It's original and breaks away from the "norm".
More soon please...Hugs.

PS: I think the temp title is great.

[shouldsleep]

Thanks!

[60schic]

Well s**t---that can't be good. As if Ryan's life in this fic isn't difficult enough.

[shouldsleep]

True, and now the oatmeal has to go seven ways.

[beachtree]

Oliver Twisted? Didn't he get his fill of peanuts- and Ryan's finger tip, while in Berkeley? Oh, yeah, that's a parallel universe in the future! ; ) O.T. really is like a bad rash or some for of pestilence. He just keeps popping up and spreading- with impeccable timing. As if poor Ryan didn't have enough to contend with as A.J.'s human punching bag and choice for regular and random target practice

[shouldsleep]

Thank you for continuing to follow the story. I'm glad the characters seem familiar, if not completely in character.

[beachtree]

I'd say they are both familiar, and in character- at least in character the way I would have preferred them to be and remain. Seth became insufferable far too soon and lost any appeal for that reason, T.T. became downright intolerable to me by the time of "The My Two Dads." Having both of them, at the very least retaining what could have been positive qualities is a huge plus.