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shouldsleep

Camp Mendinghell Part 9/?

Jan 18, 2009 16:22

Rated: T
Disclaimer: I don't own the O.C. characters or actors. This is a work of fiction and not meant to infringe on any copyrights.
Summary: This is an AU in which Ryan meets the Newport kids at a tough love wilderness camp.
Unbetaed: (Because I don’t have one.)

They had combined the two tents into one, Luke saying the boys’ tent ( Read more... )

seth, anna, summer, a.j., au, taylor, camp, ryan, luke, mendinghell

Comments 7

katwoman76 January 19 2009, 00:42:20 UTC

I can't say that I feel sorry for Oliver.
But I'm scared for the rest of the kids, near A.J. or alone in the woods.

shouldsleep January 19 2009, 00:48:55 UTC

I don't feel bad for Oliver either. I saw a question on one of the other communities about Ryan being mauled by a bear... hmmm

fifimom January 19 2009, 06:14:45 UTC

Now you've really got me worried.

nullsys January 19 2009, 01:50:40 UTC

Only Oliver can be stupid enough to get himself killed - the killer got killed himself - too bad - not really.
I'm too a little worried for the other kids, but at least the volatile Ryan/AJ situation seems to be defused.

fifimom January 19 2009, 06:17:13 UTC

He was looking at the other boy with a kind of pleading in his eyes; as if to say ‘make it alright, Seth, just make everything okay’.
No one had ever looked at him that way, but in an instant he knew that he would do everything he could to make it okay, he would do what Ryan could not.
He would get them away from A.J..

Wonderful update, thanks.

taylorforever January 19 2009, 14:24:06 UTC

Nobody should be killed like that not even an Oliver. But it goes well with the story. I think it´s good Ryan and Seth got away. Poor Ryan. The girls are stronger anyway. I hope there won`t be more killing and no! mauling by bears. ;-) Let Taylor and Summer take A.J. on.

beachtree January 20 2009, 02:52:18 UTC

Yes, any distance was good distance when leaving behind a killer who moonlighted as a psychopathic counselor/stepfather. Then again, since A.J. sees Ryan as not only his whipping post and indentured servant, but a meal ticket- and he knows Ryan has way too much information about him, I wouldn't trust the low-life as far as I could throw him IN his barcalounger. He may not be the brightest bulb, only the most demented, but who knows what he has in store and what his exit strategy is despite misleading appearances ( ... )