I Limp Out To The Sound (Santana/Brittany) PG-13

Mar 05, 2011 21:16

Title: I Limp Out To The Sound
Author: shoutoutout
Pairing/Character: Brittany/Santana
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Santana and Brittany during and after Rachel's house party. Catharsis. Title from Foot Shooter by Frightened Rabbit.
Word Count: 1954
Spoilers: Blame It On The Alcohol
Disclaimer: I don't own Glee or the characters, no copyright infringement is ( Read more... )

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wishfulclicking March 6 2011, 18:14:50 UTC
I enjoyed reading this so much. You showed Santana and Brittany so well in this, they felt like the best version of their canon selves. I especially liked how you repeatedly mentioned Brittany's strength and showed it to be more than physical in nature.

This was my favorite part:

If she wasn't so tired she'd say, Because I miss you, because I miss this but instead she makes useless, choked noises into Brittany's face until Brittany feels so sorry for her that she kisses her quiet, pulling away as soon as Santana's composed enough to kiss her back.

It leaves her wrecked.

If she wasn't so tired she'd say, I think my heart just broke but instead she bristles and clenches her jaw and tells Brittany she's exhausted and needs her beauty sleep because she's pretty sure she's got the hangover of all hangovers to deal with tomorrow.

Brittany just nods, pressing closer anyways, her breath warm against Santana's collarbone.

"I still don't like that you whisper rollerblades to Artie, but it's OK because I love you."

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shoutoutout March 7 2011, 02:03:58 UTC
Awesome, thanks so much. This was my first attempt at Glee so I'm glad you thought it worked :)

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pee_wee_2005 March 6 2011, 21:05:01 UTC
Sad good. I think you got both of their voices down pat, Santana's especially.

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shoutoutout March 7 2011, 02:04:14 UTC
Thanks so much! I love your icon...

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mayireadtoday March 6 2011, 21:45:27 UTC
Really cool.

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shoutoutout March 7 2011, 02:04:22 UTC
Thanks :)

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sweetsicksister March 6 2011, 23:16:51 UTC
Rollerblades. Stairs. OMG that's really nasty :D

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shoutoutout March 7 2011, 02:04:37 UTC
Haha, mean Santana is basically the best part of Glee...

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w00t! illyanarasputin March 7 2011, 01:20:08 UTC
most enjoyed.

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Re: w00t! shoutoutout March 7 2011, 02:04:46 UTC
Most appreciated :)

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