A Splitting Of The Mind - Chapter 20

[shoved2agree]

Title: A Splitting Of The Mind [Chapter 20]
Author: shoved2agree
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: R/NC-17
Summary: Gerard Way sees the world differently. Alone and institutionalised, Gerard claims that he is being hunted, and that his mind holds the key to existence. Does Gerard really hold such a powerful secret? Or is he just insane like everyone else in the

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[enimsaj_2]

i could vomit. really, i could.
only because this is... i don't even know. Words cannot describe exactly how i feel about this. Not even a nice, lengthy keymash would suffice. I... um... well. I'm really glad i read this.
And even though it would take a lot of paper, can i print it? I tend to print my most favorite fics, and this... probably #4 on my list of favorites. I think it goes... The Dove Keeper, Anatomy of a Fall, the Unholyverse, and then this. So it's beaten a lot of really good fics, and you should be smug and proud and happy and stuff. ^.^

[shoved2agree]

I'm really glad you read it too :)
Feel free to print it as well! It'll take up a lot of paper though, it's 193 pages on my word doc on my computer! And i'm honoured to be on your list of favourite. All of those fics are amazing so to be associated with them is awesome!

Thanks for your comment :D

[misery27]

I can't do anything but keymash (considering it's 6:45 in the morning and I've only been awake since 6) but yeah. So, basically, take this as the slightly more coherent key-smash of excitement, freak-out-ery, "oh my god this is amazing," and anticipation.

Coherency Time!

[misery27]

So, a more coherent little review-y-thing.
I have to admit, I screamed a little when I saw that Brendon's back. He's my favorite. "You're not religious. You don't even believe in Jesus." I WANT TO GIVE BRENDON A HUG OKAY. ALL THE TIME. YOU MAKE EVERYTHING OKAY, EVEN DR. LETO'S EXISTENCE.
End fangirl rant.
Anyway, the rest of this chapter is simply amazing. From Dr. Evil (I miss Markman) to Skull. Frank's okay now. Gerard's paranoia and depression. What was his secret?
The end... just makes me think. Of course, I want Gerard to wake up and for everything to be okay. Then again, I want a lot of things (like Dr. Leto's face to be smashed into a mirror).
That's all, really, and it still turned out incoherent, didn't it? Oh well. So I'm off to ponder and wait for the epilogue.

Re: Coherency Time!

[shoved2agree]

I had to bring Brendon back, i love him! :D
I'm so glad you liked it, thanks for commenting!
I like incoherent comments, just saying.

Amazing

[emo_panda_101]

This is seriously my favorite chapter fic. Every time I see you've updated I mentally prepare myself, that's how beautifully this is written. I'm completely speechless. This story will always find a way to make me cry or feel sad, cause I feel so in touch with Gerard, I have so much in common with him. You deserve an award or something like that for writing such a beautiful story. I hope that after the epilogue, you'll write another fic. All in all, I just wanted to tell you that I love this story and I love you for writing it.

Craziness and Fun,
Frankie loves you <333333

Re: Amazing

[shoved2agree]

Thank you! And yes, I do plan to write another fic; I have it allll figured out. It's gonna be rad! :D

[yaminoshugoshin]

So, the general consensus is that the chapter is good so far ;D

I told you it was fucking awesome >:]

I lesbians you. Hahahaha.

[shoved2agree]

I know! It was awesome, wasn't it?

[howxixdisappear]

Ohmygod I love this. Every time I think this fic can't break my heart anymore, another chapter comes out, and then. CRUNCH CRUNCH CRUNCH. I think its just splinters now.

This is my fic in the history of forever. It's also the only fic I read anymore, sooo good job =D It's absolutely amazing. I can't wait for the epilogue.

[shoved2agree]

Hee, thank you! You really know to boost my ego. Put the splinters in a bag so you can glue them back together later.