My sucky songs

[shreddinviolin]

Song #1 Untitled

Comments

[loud_cat]

I really like song two. Tonight I will try writing song lyrics and hopefully post them tommorow.

[loud_cat]

I finish my lyrics. You can read them if you want.

[bulbmusic5]

I'm sure the written word doesn't do justice to them. Maybe if they rhymed, or at least sort of rhymed..... just a suggestion....

[shreddinviolin]

You are obviously entitled to your opinion. I do believe that there are plenty of good songs that don't rhyme. Of course I'm not saying my songs are good, I'm just saying I think they sound much better then they look on the page. I really liked your song though, which rhymed. I guess it all depends on personal preference. I would really like to learn your song. Who really would rather visit collages then see me? Like nobody! hahaha cause I'm the coolest ever, plus I have no ego at all hahaha wow, I'm an idiot.

[bulbmusic5]

I'm just saying that many songs that don't technically rhyme still have some sort of sound similarity, or at least use words that specifically sound good together instead of rhymes, or something like that. And of course I'd love to stay in Portland for that time, but I may out of necessity and/or parental demands have to go somewhere else.

[shreddinviolin]

It's just as well. I figured as much. Nothing ever turns out the way it should. I don't even take my own advice. I'm a bigger idiot then I previously thought.