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101_shenanigans November 11 2010, 08:01:28 UTC
That was cute.

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languagegirl November 11 2010, 08:47:25 UTC
I counter your hatred of beat poetry with Andrea Gibson and Buddy Wakefield. Beat poetry's not really my style generally, but I saw them live last year and they did actually manage to make a good third of the audience tear up a little (myself included). Spoken word poetry also allows interaction between poets that poetry doesn't usually, and they had a really good comedic back and forth going with "short poems". Couldn't find any clips of it though...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GoWNnt4Fdh4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bHX3qtJlmdU&feature=related

Also, you do realize that you're judging based on one college publication, right? Just saying.

I thought "A Winter Day" was sweet, liking the seasonal imagery.

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shugurim November 11 2010, 09:55:03 UTC
I don't have a problem with spoken word poetry, only when people write written poetry as if it were spoken word. And when that's like all they write. It makes for a nice effect when used sparingly, but using it everywhere is like writing only harry/draco hatefics.

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celzmccelz November 11 2010, 12:02:16 UTC
Your poetry rage is hilarious. I am laughing my ass off. It's so true, though. A lot of contemporary poetry is fucking crap.

I don't think your poem is pretentious at all. It sounds very sincere. Andrew doesn't know what he's talking about.

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