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TWW FIC: Tomorrow I'll Miss You

Jul 15, 2010 23:34

Title: Tomorrow I'll Miss You
Author: shutterbug_12
Characters: CJ/Danny
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Only borrowing. Make love, not lawsuits.
Summary: CJ could keep up the act for only so long.
Author's Note: Post-The Portland Trip. 303 words. Written for babykid528 at raedbard's The West Wing Comment Ficathon. Feedback and concrit is love.

( She avoided the temptation to march to Danny's desk and blurt out every question in her head. Resisted the impulses to demand answers--reasons--as if she had a right to them. )

cj/danny, tww

Comments 16

diana_hawthorne July 16 2010, 03:46:35 UTC

LOVE THIS, especially the last line ♥

shutterbug_12 July 16 2010, 04:27:59 UTC

Thank you! =) I like how CJ knows she needs to 'keep up appearances' and, more than that, has honed it to perfection. So glad you liked this! <3

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shutterbug_12 September 6 2010, 01:17:56 UTC

So sorry for the late reply (I can't believe I wasn't on top of these comments). But I'm glad you liked this! =)

magisterequitum July 16 2010, 13:23:21 UTC

Ooohhhh. This is lovely, in a heartbreak kind of way. The last two paragraphs are done really well.

(Also, don't know if you saw or not, but I filled one of yours a couple of days ago. I'm trying to finish up the other one too.)

shutterbug_12 September 6 2010, 01:19:53 UTC

So sorry for the late reply (I can't believe I wasn't on top of these comments). But thank you! There's a lot of sadness involved in them for me before they finally get things together. Happy you liked this. =)

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shutterbug_12 September 6 2010, 01:21:02 UTC

So sorry for the late reply (I can't believe I wasn't on top of these comments). But thanks! I think CJ's really developed that skin, if only because of her job. I imagine the transfer to personal things wouldn't be hard for her. Glad you liked this. =)

amy_119 July 16 2010, 14:43:29 UTC

Awww. I love it. CJ and Danny are the best. <3

shutterbug_12 September 6 2010, 01:22:54 UTC

So sorry for the late reply (I can't believe I wasn't on top of these comments). But thanks! They're so sweet (but sometimes sad), but it's why I love them. =)