TWW FIC: When I'm Worn and Find You Waiting

[shutterbug_12]

Title: When I'm Worn and Find You Waiting
Author: shutterbug_12
Characters: Josh/Amy
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Only borrowing. Make love, not lawsuits.
Summary: "You're--a tease. You're mean, you know that?"
Author's Note: Please read my thoughts about cross-posting found in my profile. Approximate timeline: Stirred (3.17) - Enemies Foreign and Domestic (3.

Comments

[corleones]

!!!
Someone wrote me Josh/Amy fic! This is adorable and very very Josh. And I love your icon. That is all.

[shutterbug_12]

I always do happy-joy dances when I happen across a new Josh/Amy fic, so I hear those exclamation points. ;) I loved your prompt; it grabbed at me, and it was a pleasure to write. I'm very glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate the comment. <3

(I love your icon, too. That part, when she says she misses him. Guh. *huggles Amy*)

[kindness_says]

...You are everywhere.

shutterbug_12, I just realized I don't think I ever told you, but I'm pretty sure Josh/Amy listed in your ships was the reason I poked you on that friending meme.

[amy_119]

Aww. Very cute. Also sexy. Win-win. :)

Edit: I forgot to mention, I also really like the title.

[shutterbug_12]

Thanks! I just couldn't say no to this prompt I saw at the drabbleathon. Clicking at all was just my undoing. Hee. Glad you like it (and the title, too, since I kind of liked this one myself). =)

I made some recent changes and like the revisions much better. Nothing huge, but I thought I'd mention it. Thanks for the read (as always). <3

[magisterequitum]

Very nice.

I like the imagery of the third paragraph. And the overall feeling of the entire piece. This makes me want to pull out the DVDs and watch them.

(There are some longer sentences that could have maybe been cut down, but other than it's really well done.)

[shutterbug_12]

Thank you! <3 I appreciate that. =)

(Please tell me which ones. I have lots of time to take another look at them before I post to the comms. I didn't get a beta on it, since I finished it late last night, so anything you can suggest would be great.)

[magisterequitum]

It really was lovely. And I forgot to say that the dialogue felt so realistic for them.

(As for the sentences: Your first two paragraphs are made up of really long sentences. It's a bit word-y if you read it out loud. I don't think you need all of the descriptions that you have in there. Or breaking them into shorter sentences would make it easier to read and to track with your eyes. Just a thought. It's totally up to you.)

[shutterbug_12]

I made some changes. Let me know what you think. Thanks for the input. I really appreciate it. =) And thanks again, for the other nice things. Hee. <3

[shutterbug_12]

*g* Thank you! I've been on a bit of a kick with them lately, so the prompt I read really grabbed me. Glad you liked it! Thanks, as always, for the nice comment. =)

[foggymornings]

Mmm ... yes. :-) I like this very much. The dialogue is so spot on, and the imagery ... loves it. Nice work!

[shutterbug_12]

Thanks! I appreciate that. =) It was a fun one to write--I had a good prompt to work from. Glad you liked it!