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emothy in shutupanddoeet

Challenge Eleven

Jun 05, 2009 19:42

After a long while, we are going to get back on track and try our hands at some writing again, yes? XD

Take a peek at the image prompts, based around Primary and Secondary colours:

( Images from Deviantart )

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Here goes: Drugged, Nightrunner, Alec, Seregil, Thero, PG-13 (ish), 762 words (purple poison) vacivity June 7 2009, 20:36:02 UTC

Alec laughs and the noise sounds distant to his ears and for a brief second he thinks to be afraid. But then Seregil is there, glaring at someone - him? Alec wonders, but no, Thero is right behind him and that's probably who Seregil was pissed at. They had started to get along a little better, but there's still a little animosity between them and really, Seregil shouldn't be glaring at poor Thero like that, ready to murder him, because Thero's not really that bad ( ... )

part 1 emothy June 11 2009, 16:33:46 UTC

Inspired by this image. Very patchy, could do with filling out in places, but it's longer than I anticipated anyway and I didn't want to do anymore in case it never ENDED!When Shin invites Yankumi to his apartment, mostly it's because there are times when he just doesn't want to be surrounded by all those other faces that linger in her home. He doesn't need Yankumi's grandfather nodding sagely and handing down the wisdom of his years, and he certainly doesn't need the sniggers and trip-ups of Tetsu and Minoru. (Shin figures they must at least be good at their jobs because of the life they live, and the fact that between them they haven't lost a finger yet - a tradition he learnt about directly from Yankumi. The two of them just don't seem to understand how to handle general communication ( ... )

part 2 emothy June 11 2009, 16:34:12 UTC

"Don't you think," Shin says, picking at the carpet while Yankumi finishes off her instant ramen, "it's kind of weird how you're always here ( ... )

Re: part 2 anenko June 11 2009, 20:09:32 UTC

I love your Shin so very much--he always feels very *real.* This story was no exception.

Re: part 2 emothy June 11 2009, 21:37:23 UTC

You have a talent for making me feel better about my writing, every time! I think in adding things to the directory, I reminded MYSELF that I never really write Shin and Kumiko together. And that what I wanted to see - Shin wondering about her sexual history and exploits - I had yet to see. Of course, I haven't written it to my own satisfaction here either, but I've tried, I see what doesn't fit right, and I will try again! XD

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