Like Tomorrow Was Promised

Sep 04, 2010 18:05

Title: Like Tomorrow Was Promised
Rating: PG-13, I suppose? A tiny bit of language.
Fandom: As The World Turns
Pairing: Luke/Reid
A/N: I told myself I wasn't going to write speculative-ending-fic (read: set myself up for disappointment), but then this happened. And it's probably one of the worst things I've ever written but I'm too pissed at the show ( Read more... )

fic: as the world turns

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snowmore September 5 2010, 01:00:18 UTC
This reads so heartbreakingly. I'm sorry. I can't finish it. :)

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shutupanddplay September 5 2010, 06:45:36 UTC
I'm glad to hear it has an effect, at least! But I totally understand. Just thinking about the ending is really difficult atm. Thanks for giving it a shot, though! <3

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slayerkitty September 5 2010, 01:03:32 UTC
I'm crying.

Then he's gone, Luke's hand still clutched in his own as his final breath fades away, the softest sigh of "love" lingering impossibly in the air as two lives shatter and the world- oblivious, unconcerned- continues to turn around them.

*sob*

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shutupanddplay September 5 2010, 06:47:42 UTC
So sorry I made you cry- but thanks so much for reading! It means a lot that it had such an effect. <3

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yoursinginlover September 5 2010, 01:18:15 UTC
wow. so sad.
so well written.

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shutupanddplay September 5 2010, 06:55:57 UTC
Thank you!

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abrokencompass September 5 2010, 02:00:26 UTC
Beautiful, but so heartbreaking. That's exactly how I want Tuesday to go.

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shutupanddplay September 5 2010, 07:14:36 UTC
The way the show's been going lately, I'm not optimistic that the ending will be anywhere near what these characters deserve- but I'm still holding out the slightest bit of hope that it will redeem itself at least somewhat with those final scenes.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! <3

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roseish September 5 2010, 02:20:49 UTC
I'm actually crying. I never cry for fic. That was beautiful.

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shutupanddplay September 5 2010, 07:17:01 UTC
Oh, wow, I'm so sorry I made you cry...but thank you so much! It means a lot that it had such an effect.

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roseish September 5 2010, 12:53:16 UTC
Nothing to be sorry about! It was a very cathartic cry so I thank you.

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