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[shutupbetsy]

Frive!

at this moment, my favorite

1. ...song?
Erin McKeown-- Born to Hum

2. ...food?
chocolate

3. ...tv show?
Star Trek: TNG

4. ...scent?
botanical stuff from Newport

5. ...quote?
"Mekka Lecca hi, Mekka I hate you"

Comments

[transcribe]

I feel bad. The piece I sent wasn't very good. If you want something else much more polished and complete, I could send it to you. The Bunny Fisher *short* story for instance? Let me know what you need. I am here for you. =)

xo

[shutupbetsy]

You're awesome, Jill. I am going to have a go at editing down what you sent, because I like the idea of having something about the power structure of women. I'll let you know if I can't make it manageable. :)

[transcribe]

I took it to my writing group and the said what I suspected, "It's too surface, too removed, not enough first hand account or emotion." It's true. It was hard subject matter so I tended to shy away from it.

I'm going to send you Bunny Fisher anyway, just 'cause it's much more straight forward. I'm sorry this year's issues is turning out to be a challenge. I don't want to add to the headache!!

[mein_untergehen]

you have 180 lj friends.

you are now one of THOSE people.