hilum

Mar 24, 2014 23:36

Title: hilum
Rating: soft R (tags under cut)
Genre: romance, a little angsty and dark
Disclaimer: I own nothing and nobody regarding the boys >:
Summary: A series of moments, memories, thoughts, nights, problems, and not-problems as Kame works around his conflicting professional and unprofessional relationship with Jin.
Others: grey-a/asexual ( Read more... )

p: akame, r: r, l: oneshot

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mae0513 March 25 2014, 08:28:43 UTC
Thanks for sharing ~

like it~

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shuu_cream March 25 2014, 17:14:20 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ

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shuu_cream March 25 2014, 17:16:19 UTC
Ahhh thank you so much~~ for your kind words and the #FEELS ❤️ I'm so glad.

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dori_liv March 25 2014, 11:53:47 UTC
This is the first time I've read any of your fics but I will surely be reading more. I also took a little look at your masterpost/artwork and they look good. So, I don't know, maybe expect sporadic and random comments from me scattered through this journal.

I love how you represented Kame and all his confusing emotions and feelings. And the comparisions between Jin and Kame and all the ways they are different/opposites yet they fit together so well ♥ Some quotes I like, because that's how I roll when I read something I love but can't quite find the words.

if he and Jin weren't bound to the same path as a pair.

Kame is a people pleaser but he can't find perfection for Jin

Jin's so free and Kame can't let go, loves Jin with every available beat of his heart,

poking around in his body to try and find some of those good feelings it knows should be there

I don't like boys and you don't like anyone, but we're still here.

emotion but he doesn't know which one.

Kame drifts off to sleep unable to place which beats are his own.Thanks so ( ... )

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shuu_cream March 25 2014, 17:20:32 UTC
Ahh then welcome to my fic journal ;; it's a bit old and weathered now but I hope there's still some other things you'll like. Thank you so much, and for giving me some quotes - I was trying out a style that came more naturally to me but broke several of the 'rules' I've always stuck to, so I was a bit nervous about it.

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dori_liv March 25 2014, 17:24:51 UTC
what kind of rules? /curious
I think your natural style is great

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shuu_cream March 25 2014, 17:43:13 UTC
Thank you ❤️ Mostly regarding sentence structure, how much or little and what should be described, how to manage dialogue and emotions.. Agh, I'm so tempted to go back and rewrite some things :C this style feels a lot more expressive. Though I've had this journal for so long, how I write people and how those people think, feel and deal with things has changed too ;; (I had kind of planned on not coming back to Akame and starting over new somewhere else, it's been strange coming back ;__; )

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rrant March 29 2014, 01:08:39 UTC
I loved this so much, I had no knowledge of grey-a sexuality before reading this so thank you for that, it's always interesting to learn about different kinds of sexualities. Also, you really made it fit to Akame. Thank you for this!

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shuu_cream March 29 2014, 01:31:47 UTC
Thank you so much! ^^ I'm glad you think it fits them - I've been pondering subjects like this for a while but up until recently have had constant lacks of confidence in portraying one of them like this. Glad you found it educational too :Dv

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ennuimaster April 4 2014, 03:00:34 UTC
It's the first time i ever read one of ur works and i think ill read more :)
This is just too beautiful, and i hope that you will continue to write :)

It's my first time to read a fic with asexuality elements and im surprised how much i liked it.

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