Sonnet

Mar 18, 2005 19:20

I need someone's help with my sonnet i don't know what to write in the thrid paragraph this if anyone has ne ideas post a comment. Here is the sonnet ( Read more... )

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on__the_edge March 19 2005, 01:24:50 UTC
ok....i figured out something....now dont kill me...cause it probably sucks but at least its an idea for you.....

My teammates and I are all awesome friends
Pitcher, catcher, short-stop and outfielders
Playing together 'till the final end
Sitting and cheering from the large bleachers.

it kinda doesnt make sense.....but maybe u can find a way to make it so that it does.....

if you need help rhyming things.....theres a great web site that helped me with my sonnet..... http://www.rhymezone.com

hope i helped somewhat....

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Hey shwoopy9 March 19 2005, 01:27:37 UTC
hey thanks anything helps now i just need ideas so i might be able to work with that!! thanks

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Re: Hey on__the_edge March 19 2005, 01:57:15 UTC
no problemo...

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a2244freak March 19 2005, 14:07:58 UTC
My teammates and I are all awesome friends
we play eat and sleep together
we each chickens rosters and hens
i will always love them forever and ever

i like it....:)

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Sonnet shwoopy9 March 21 2005, 04:35:58 UTC
Dani's was MUCH better than urs...AND WE EAT ROSTERS?? HUH

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