Look At Me author: shy_cookie pairing: JongTae (or HyuMin) / Taemin/Junho genre: romance, angst, drama Summary: It all started with Taemin annoying Jonghyun.
omg you liked this?? I think it sucked so bad! honestly I do! I think I can do much better than this but still...happy you liked it! they are evil! they knew he was watching and didn't stopped!!!!!!!!!! idk what Jonghyun will do maybe stop being so dense?
Bad Jjong!!! Perv! LOL! Who could blame him?! I just hope this doesn't end up backfiring on Tae. Sometimes what we want and plan ends up blowing up in our faces. Please tell me that won't happen to Tae. Hot chapter otherwise! *fans herself* Go TAE!!
WHAT?!!?? Tae's innocence is gone!!!!!!!! OMG!!! That was sooo unexpected! I mean I knew Tae wanted jjong to be jealous and all that. Plus we all know Tae is secretly dirty and not as innocent as he seems but Omo! Sex already!! And do I sense tae being attracted to junho???? But Aww I know jjong can be sooo oblivious and an ass sometimes but awwwwwe poor jjong :( I actually felt bad for him. He seemed so hurt. Tae seemed so bad. Sigh. Love is sooo complicated I wonder how all his will come about :)
YOU THINK THIS IS CRAPPY? YOU FJSGHKJHGBKSDJGSUK! In other words : I FUCKIN LOVED IT And I'm so freakin happy right now because Jonghyun is totally in Taemin's trap now XD He couldn't even take his eyes 0ff them XD And Taemin... oh Taemin! Such a little tease! Well, for Jonghyun XD Because Junho was pretty much THE tease here XD But I'm kinda sad for Junho! He knows Taemin just did it to show Jonghyun but he still acts cool! When his heart will be broken I'll make him a big hug :) BECAUSE JONGTAE IS GOING TO HAPPEN SOON! Right? AND YOU INCLUDED JONGHOOOOO <3 You know I love it XD Slutty Taemin + Dirty talking Junho + Stalker Jonghyun = me being dead :) And I love it :D
pwahahahah you always make me laugh with your comments! was my JongHo too obvious?? XD (of course it was!) Junho is the tease, and JongTae will happen of course! This is a JongTae fic isn't it??? btw, I just know you want more smut, so do tell what you want to happen!
Jongho? Obvious? Noooo XD HAHA I LOVE HOW YOU SAY YOU JUST KNOW I WANT MORE SMUT XD Of course I do XD So, if I listen to my inner fluffy self I would say I want Jongtae to have a romantic first time with candles and flowers, but I don't feel like it. I want Jonghyun to totally jump on Taemin because he's so jealous and fuck him senseless. Against a wall. Jonghyun being kinda rough? And Taemin loving it? But I'm simple person with simple wishes so I think it's enough XD But I'm not against a treesome with Junho...XD
omg. jong is like the husband coming home from work finding his wife with another woman o.0 damn i'm feeling so sorry for junho now (though he gets what he wants) because he knew jong was watching and taemin was ...you know...ahh. AHAHA THOUGH. i kinda laughed a bit when you wrote about how jong couldn't stop staring XDD typical perve jong!! but then, taemin and junhoa are like hoottt!! who wouldn't (probably me because i would like to see jongkey or jongho XD ) LMAO got my pervy mind going with all the smut >.< in a good way XD i wonder what min does!!!!! ahhh would jong get pissed and and and....omFG! would he um...''punish'' taemin as well!?!?!?!?
*mental spazz* kiNLSDKjcmhostl;gkxnhjm tnh;g xcgtmfl; okay. calm. *runs away at her dirty thoughts* <333333
now that is a big comment XD I don't remember having such a big comment from you! ahaha ikr?? it made me laugh too XD idk why but while I was writing it made me laugh as well! Junho knew what meant to be with Taemin so he's ready for whatever is going to happen
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TAEMIN AH!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDD
OH WHY IS THIS SO PERFECT!!!
Especially Jjong's feelings to all this and Taemin's determination to get Jonghyun!!!
Jonghyun doesn't even know why he's feeling that way XDDD How dense can he be?! XD
Junho's in the seventh heaven XD
AND THEY BOTH KNEW JONGHYUN WAS WATCHING! OMG. XDDD
EVIL PERSONS XD
Bad boys~
teehee XD
Now Jjong... what's your mastermind plan for getting Tae? XD
<3 ~~
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I think it sucked so bad!
honestly
I do! I think I can do much better than this
but still...happy you liked it! they are evil! they knew he was watching and didn't stopped!!!!!!!!!!
idk what Jonghyun will do
maybe stop being so dense?
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I mean I knew Tae wanted jjong to be jealous and all that. Plus we all know Tae is secretly dirty and not as innocent as he seems but Omo! Sex already!!
And do I sense tae being attracted to junho????
But Aww I know jjong can be sooo oblivious and an ass sometimes but awwwwwe poor jjong :( I actually felt bad for him. He seemed so hurt. Tae seemed so bad. Sigh. Love is sooo complicated
I wonder how all his will come about :)
Thanks for sharing ^^
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YOU FJSGHKJHGBKSDJGSUK!
In other words : I FUCKIN LOVED IT
And I'm so freakin happy right now because Jonghyun is totally in Taemin's trap now XD
He couldn't even take his eyes 0ff them XD
And Taemin... oh Taemin!
Such a little tease!
Well, for Jonghyun XD
Because Junho was pretty much THE tease here XD
But I'm kinda sad for Junho!
He knows Taemin just did it to show Jonghyun but he still acts cool!
When his heart will be broken I'll make him a big hug :)
BECAUSE JONGTAE IS GOING TO HAPPEN SOON! Right?
AND YOU INCLUDED JONGHOOOOO <3
You know I love it XD
Slutty Taemin + Dirty talking Junho + Stalker Jonghyun = me being dead :)
And I love it :D
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you always make me laugh with your comments!
was my JongHo too obvious?? XD (of course it was!)
Junho is the tease, and JongTae will happen of course! This is a JongTae fic isn't it???
btw, I just know you want more smut, so do tell what you want to happen!
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HAHA I LOVE HOW YOU SAY YOU JUST KNOW I WANT MORE SMUT XD
Of course I do XD
So, if I listen to my inner fluffy self I would say I want Jongtae to have a romantic first time with candles and flowers, but I don't feel like it.
I want Jonghyun to totally jump on Taemin because he's so jealous and fuck him senseless.
Against a wall.
Jonghyun being kinda rough?
And Taemin loving it?
But I'm simple person with simple wishes so I think it's enough XD
But I'm not against a treesome with Junho...XD
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damn i'm feeling so sorry for junho now (though he gets what he wants) because he knew jong was watching and taemin was ...you know...ahh.
AHAHA THOUGH. i kinda laughed a bit when you wrote about how jong couldn't stop staring XDD typical perve jong!! but then, taemin and junhoa are like hoottt!! who wouldn't (probably me because i would like to see jongkey or jongho XD )
LMAO got my pervy mind going with all the smut >.< in a good way XD
i wonder what min does!!!!! ahhh would jong get pissed and and and....omFG! would he um...''punish'' taemin as well!?!?!?!?
*mental spazz*
kiNLSDKjcmhostl;gkxnhjm tnh;g xcgtmfl;
okay. calm.
*runs away at her dirty thoughts*
<333333
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I don't remember having such a big comment from you!
ahaha
ikr??
it made me laugh too XD
idk why but while I was writing it made me laugh as well! Junho knew what meant to be with Taemin
so he's ready for whatever is going to happen
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