Fic: Bedtime Story, Chapter 1

Jun 01, 2011 18:49

Title: Bedtime Story
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Steve/Danny, pre-slash
Warnings, spoilers, etc.: This fic is finale-free and does not have spoilers for any specific episodes. Some chapters have references to flashbacks and nightmares, as well as moderate Steve!whumping and angst.
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genagirl June 2 2011, 03:26:02 UTC
LOL! I loved it!

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shy_dragon June 3 2011, 00:27:05 UTC
Thank you!

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deepbluemermaid June 2 2011, 03:42:01 UTC
Oh, bless, this is lovely. I like Danny picking up on Steve's needs and fears, and that bedtime story is hilariously adorable. I'm looking forward to more :)

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shy_dragon June 3 2011, 00:29:39 UTC
Thank you very much! For some reason, "Guns & Ammo" was the first thing I thought of when I got the idea of Steve needing a bedtime story. ;>

Chapter 2 is available now.

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five0fan June 2 2011, 08:43:48 UTC
loved the bedtime story. Danny is so funny and very thoughtful and he's certainly a great partner to have.

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shy_dragon June 3 2011, 00:31:00 UTC
Thank you! I think Danny's a sweetheart under all that ranting.

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sherry57 June 2 2011, 14:21:50 UTC
So sweet! The choice of a bedtime story was so perfect and I loved Steve's chuckle as Danny started to read. Lovely hon!!

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shy_dragon June 3 2011, 00:34:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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abbeyrd62561 June 3 2011, 05:12:38 UTC
Wonderful, I am glad that Steve sees how much Danny knows him and gave in. Danny , you gotta love him, telling Steve what he is going to do and then realizing that Steve hadn't been taken care of since his mom died. I like the way you have Danny say things to Steve that are what Steve is feeling. The article had me laughing, of course it would be what Danny would read to Steve...love the kiss good-night. And the way Danny told Steve lucky for him he had plenty of nieces, nephews and a good daughter so he know how to take care of five year olds....of course not exact words but I just loved that.

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shy_dragon June 3 2011, 23:46:49 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

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