Fic: Bedtime Story, Chapter 4

[shy_dragon]

Title: Bedtime Story
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Steve/Danny, pre-slash
Warnings, spoilers, etc.: This fic is finale-free and does not have spoilers for any specific episodes. Some chapters have references to flashbacks and nightmares, as well as moderate Steve!whumping and angst.
Disclaimer: Hawaii 5-0 does not belong to me, and no infringement is

Comments

[demilo19]

I really enjoy the forehead kisses Danny bestows upon Steve. Steve's panic at being left alone works really well in this story as well as Danny's motherhenning.

[shy_dragon]

Thank you! Danny can't help being a softy around Steve, and this is giving him a good excuse.

[starbuckssue]

I love the way this story is developing, Danny's gentle kisses are so sweet and he's leaving it just long enough that Steve's half asleep so not sure whether it's real.

[shy_dragon]

Thank you! Danny's hoping for at least reasonable doubt. ;>

[tmelange]

This is so sweet. Bravo!

[shy_dragon]

Thank you!!

[megaranight]

I like how the story goes on, with Danny more and more comfortable with his readings. One day, Danny may read a kind of spy novel with very hot sex scenes to Steve (you know, the kind of cheap novel with one scene of action, one scene of sex and so on). Just to see how Danny would do the reading (like, he's skipping the scene) or like he's reading it very quickly.
It's a really sweet story.

I *loved* the signature thing!!!

[shy_dragon]

[laughs] Oh, that's the problem with doing this as a finished piece instead of a work-in-progress -- I never thought of that. It sounds like a fun story though! Hmmm, if Danny skipped the sex scenes, would Steve notice or would he just assume that the book went from action to action? Of course, when he went back to re-read it later, he'd notice some differences.... ;>

[deepbluemermaid]

Mmm, I just love this - the team's so caring and sensitive to Steve's needs, and Steve is letting himself be helped. I like the humour in this too:

(Danny made sure that any orders would need his or Chin's signature while Steve was on medical leave.)

Oh, and coincidentally: just yesterday, I added a section to my werewolf!Steve H/C story about Chin telling football stories to Steve while he's sedated :)

[shy_dragon]

Thank you! I can't seem to help putting in some humor with the angst, so I'm glad it fits together.

And yay! I'm looking forward to the next installment on your werewolf!Steve story.