Fic: Building a Team

Apr 29, 2012 21:39

Title: Building a Team
Characters: Danny, Steve, Kono, Chin, Grace
Rating: G, gen
Disclaimer: Neither Hawaii 5-0 nor the X-Men belong to me, and no infringement is intended.
Summary: Danny and the security team at Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters work together to rescue Grace. This story was originally posted to the Hawaii 5-0 Flash FictionRead more... )

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moon_foot May 4 2012, 13:57:32 UTC
Aww that's was lovely! Steve has Tentacles. Of course he has tentacles :P
Are you planning on expending this Verse? I think it has lots of potential :D

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shy_dragon May 6 2012, 19:17:07 UTC
Thank you! I'm already working on a follow up and have plans for another story in this 'verse.

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indigocat May 29 2012, 00:48:50 UTC
Enjoyed reading. Can you imagine Danny and Wolverine in a scent together?

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shy_dragon May 30 2012, 03:25:06 UTC
[grin] The problem with putting Danny and Wolverine together is that Wolverine would want to strangle Danny to make him "shut up, just for five minutes, I don't care, just Stop Talking!" Of course, Danny would go off on Wolverine's anger management issues. Then Steve would get jealous, and it would all go downhill from there.

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indigocat June 1 2012, 02:12:10 UTC
Professor X would not be happy.

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mystizan June 11 2012, 06:12:55 UTC
WRITE THIS. I WANT TO READ IT. THE PREMISE IS MAKING ME GIGGLE.

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shy_dragon May 30 2012, 03:27:50 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm definitely planning to continue, although I realized that the bit I thought would come next is actually more just backstory, and I need to finish the actual plotty bit first. I'm working on it though, really!

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enigmaticblues May 29 2012, 02:37:43 UTC
This was adorable. I loved the idea of Steve's power being useless, and I really liked Chin and Kono's powers, and how they meshed with their skills on the show.

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shy_dragon May 30 2012, 03:29:12 UTC
Thank you very much! Sometimes it seems like Steve is amazing at everything he does (except feelings), so it was fun to give him a really weak power.

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aussiejo May 29 2012, 02:52:46 UTC
Oh I dunno about Steve's tentacles being useless. I can think of at least one........'blush'

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pattyfeidt May 29 2012, 02:59:34 UTC
yay!!! someone else went there *G* I was too chicken

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shy_dragon May 30 2012, 03:38:27 UTC
[chuckle] So far, so am I. The plot bunnies and muse may gang up on me though!

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shy_dragon May 30 2012, 03:37:17 UTC
Well, they're really small, so it wouldn't be quite like most things I've read with tentacles. I've been thinking about how it might work though. (Then I think about expiring from embarrassment.) [grin]

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