Flagstaff (2/3)

Apr 15, 2010 03:31


Title:  Flagstaff
Characters:  Sam, Dean, John, Bobby, OMC
Rating:  PG-13 (language)
Spoilers:  Derived from part of 5.16, Dark Side of the Moon
Summary:  After finding Sam, John decides a visit with Bobby is in order.

Part 2 )

sam, dean, john, flagstaff, bobby

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shyriann April 16 2010, 00:09:18 UTC
I'd hoped to have it done tonight, but with it already being 8pm here, that's just not gonna happen... but I'm off tomorrow, and if they don't break my heart with the 100th ep so badly I lay in bed and cry all day, I should have it done by tomorrow night or Saturday. Glad you're enjoying it!

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shyriann April 16 2010, 00:07:30 UTC
Yep, that's the only way I could find to write it. John may not have been the best of fathers, but he loved those boys, enough to willingly go to hell for them. I'm sorry to anyone who was expecting an Ass!John story, but I adore the man, and simply cannot bring myself to write him that way. But we all know how Dean's self-esteem issues and overblown sense of responsibilty has him hearing half the truth and taking all the blame... so that's how this one had to go for me.

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dreamlitnight April 15 2010, 13:21:45 UTC
Oh, you have broken those boys down. Please tell me you plan on putting them back together, at least fixing them a little? Bobby can help, he's awesome. This story rings so true. Lovely job. Hope there's more soon.

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shyriann April 16 2010, 00:04:36 UTC
There will be fixing, I promise. I intend to have no flowers or hearts involved, but the boys managed to care about each other for at least another seven years before they hurt each other again, so I have to do some boo-boo band-aiding somehow. And yeah, Bobby's awesome like that, which is exactly why I took all three of them to his house. John broke it? Bobby can fix it! I hope...

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shyriann April 16 2010, 00:02:01 UTC
LOL I wish it weren't. I have six other stories to be working on, and this one just wouldn't leave me alone. I thought it was just going to be one semi-long chapter, but the longer it got, the more I found needed to be told. I couldn't seem to make myself just do a "Break it, cry over it, fix it" quickie on this one. It may end up with four chapters, but I'm trying real hard to condense the end.

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rocit63 April 17 2010, 00:30:16 UTC
I am thrilled with this story! I can't thank you enough for writing it! I love Bobby taking John to task, reminding John that Dean is just a boy. I am really looking forward to part 3, please post more soon!

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shyriann April 19 2010, 05:55:55 UTC
Heh, good Ol' Bobby. Never afraid to tell John he's being an ass. I love writing Bobby's old grouchy attitude.

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