My fan FIc

Nov 29, 2002 14:55

Alrighty this is my fan fic I wrote It's pretty long so get a cup of hot choclate and snuggle with a blanket. Ignore the stupid errors it's not done yet, revising anyways. It's only chapter one, I have part of Chapter two but I'll keep osting them every time I get a chacne to work on them!


OK just to note right now, a really huge grey bird just nearly mised my window.. dear god I think it hit my house.. *heart attacK*

This is a fan fic I wrote which portrays the side of Ravenclaw prefect Penelope Clearwater and her rival prefect canadate Paschal Laramie.

"Finally" sighed the girl sitting on the right side of the compartment, her friend sat asleep in her robes across from her. She was slumped on cage that carried her black cat, Noelle. Before the girl could even awake her friend the compartyment door flew open and the first thing the girl saw was a shiny, well polished badge that read, "Hogwarts Gryffindor Prefect" Her eyes trailed frmo the now glimmering badge to the keeper of the badge. It appreated to be a boy, standing tall, about her age, 16 or so. And with nearly the same coloured hair as hers. A copperish red colour. "Hello, I just wanted to inform you that we will be arriving at Hogwarts in precisly 10 minutes. You'd better get your robes on and begin to gather your belongings." the boy finished. And without a moment, he left. "Wow, who was that?" She said aloud. That alone woke her friend, and the cat. "What have you been doing?" Said a sleepy mass of blonde hair. "Before I say anything, perhaps you should worry a bit about your hair, than me, Heidi dear." Replied the girl. "Ah, wow, thanks." Heidi said back. Heidi was a slightly taller and smaller built girl. She had shoulder lengthed blonde hair and freckles that no one could miss. Heidi stood up and straighned out her wrinkled robes. "So what were you doing?" Heidi asked. "Nothing, just reading really, before you missed this really gor---" She was interrupted by the conducter saying the Hogwarts express had just arrived to it's destination, and that they would be unloading in 3 minutes. "oh geeze, I need to go get my robes on.. I need to run to the toliet real fast, don't think about leaving without me" The girl said to Heidi who was now stopping the troley to obtain some of her favourite, bernies every flavoured beans. "Sure..." Heidi said with a mouthful of the enigmatic treats. The girl ran down the hallway with her hands full with the black hogwarts robes they had issued. All of a sudden WHAM! The girl hit something rather human like, after standing up and relising what the blow was she blushed and begain picking her belongings up off the ground. "Wow, I am terrebly sorry..." She stammered out, but the boy she had hit was to busy looknig at his badge. "Oh quite alright, i'm sorry. I should have been watching where I was--" the boy stopped, and then said " Oh, I met you in the compartment, about 15 minutes back. Hello, the name's Percy. Percy Weasley. Gryffindor Prefect." Percy said proudly. "Oh hello, my name is Paschal Laramie. I'm uh.. not a prefect" she said with a laugh, carefully placing a strand of her long copper curly hair behind her ear. "Well that's quite alright... now I should stop holding you up, we are about to unload. I suggest puttnig on those robes as soon as possible, don't want you to get left behind now!" Percy said with a laugh and strided back to his compartment to gather his belongings. "wow" Paschal thought to herself. "he's definatly a cutie." But she looked up from her dream world and relised she should be attending to her robes. She ran into the one person toliet and changed rather qucikly and returned to her compartment where a heidi was found gripping her stomach in agony. "what's the matter? Find a bad one, eh?" Paschal hurridly asked. "Nooo... I think I ate too many.." heidi groaned. "OH what did I tell you, lay of 'em didn't I? Didn't I say?" Paschal said annoyed. "Now you better be hurry off, we've got to get going now." and with that Paschal slapped Heidi on the arm, and gathered her trunk and her cage with her own black cat, Kevoca. They were stepping off into this magnificent palace, that housed over 500 students in their effort to assist them in the Witchcraft and Wizardry that had run in their familes. Paschal- who was a full blood - which meant she came from both a witch mother and a wizard father- was in her 6th year at the school called, Hogwarts School for witchcraft and Wizardry. Heidi was a half blood, her mother being the witch, poor father was just a farmner, and had not a clue what he got himself into. With that they stepped out carring there various luggage, into the castle. The wind around them was whipping through their long sleek black robes, and the wind was whipping through Paschal's long curls too. Paschal was short, and fairly tiny for a 16 year old. She had stunning long copper curls that trailed down to her back. Her eyes were big and green, with a smile that could light up any room. They hurried to the house where they had been sorted their first year, both Ravenclaws. The house that students were known for their knowledge and intelect. Heidi was astonished her first year when she recieved ravenclaw. She even sat to argue with the sorting hat, she didn't think she had the intellegence, insisting that she belong in hufflepuff.. a house known for it's stumped students, most of the time. They sat their stuff outside the house common room, and ran off to the Great Hall to begin their feast of the student's first term and arrival. When they entered, almost the first ones there, they were hardly astoinished by what they were accustomed to. The ceiling was enchanted with the night stars and the dark clouds and sky. The stars were the best part. And the candels all floating there mysteriously. They focused at the front of the dinning hall, where their headmaster, Albus Dummbledore sat. His half moon specticles and long white beard where hard to miss. Next to him sat Minerva McGonagle. Head of the Gryffindor house and teacher of transfiguration class. Next to her sat Severius Snape, a quite interesting teacher that always had a liking towards his house, Slytherin, known for their evil streak. He also taught potions. Next to the other side of Dumbledor was the new teacher of Defense against the dark arts. The last one had been destryoed by a student of the name Harry POtter. Quite famous he is. heidi and Paschal took a seat at their ravenclaw table and chated about the near year and how it was almost their last. They also talked about the New Quidditch team that ravenclaw had, Paschal was the Keeper and the Captain of the Ravenclaw Quidditch team. "it's going to definatly be hard this year, Gryffindor has that damned Wood and Potter." Paschal said detesting the thought of losing, "But this summer I've put a bit of thought into it, and decided what sort of method we shuold take..." before finishing her rambling to Heidi, Penelope Clearwater, the Ravenclaw Prefect, butted in. "Excuse me, but I think you should begin worrying about your grades this term, and your O.W.L.'s as well." Penelope said in a matter-of-fact tone. Paschal had much tolerance, but couldn't stand the look of Penelope Clearwater. She was about or an inch taller than Paschal and somewhat larger. She had bright blue eyes and curly blonde hair. "Um, I am not at all worried about my grades, being the term hasen't yet even started, and if I were you, I would awtch out, because If I can recall, I gathered 12 O.W.L.s last term and I think that qualifies me to become a prefect, of course I will need to talk to..." With that penelope fluffed her blonde hair and with one wave she was gone. Paschal and Heidi laughed.. "Are yuo really going to?" Heidi asked.
"Yeah Sure, I want to be a prefect, of course it'll get me great points and its really been sort of a goal for me." Paschal finsihed. "wow, never knew.." Heidi said.
they both looked up relising the hall was now quite full and bustling with students. There was a booming voice heard above all the excited chatter, " First 'ers o'vr here! Watch out now Lads. First 'ers o'vr here!" It was the gameskeeper, Hagrid. Hagrid was a giant and had been expelled from Hogwarts his 3rd year, but for some reason Dumbledoor allowed him to stay. 'Alr'gt now lads, you j'st sit 'an wait for Pro'essor McGonagalto come 'ere 'an help you lads o'er to that ter so'ting hat." And with that Hagrid walked out, but with a breief wave over to the Gryffindor table to his friends, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley and Herminoe Granger. 'Heylo there Ron, Harry, Herminoe!" Hagrid called out. And with that he left. Professor Mcgonagalcame through the front of the first years line they had formed. She was thin liped and wore her hair tightly back in a bun that was hidden tucked inside her hat. 'Alright now, follow me. Your first step to becoming accoustumed to things at Hogwarts starts here. The sorting hat." she finsihed. ANd with that she gestured towards a tattered torn old witch's hat. It's rip seemed to form it's mouth in which it begain to say it's usual little sonnet. After it was done, the hat begain to call out a lsit of children's name's one by one, the house's they got sorted into cheering loudly as they made their way to their tables. Finally after all was seated and sorted, Mcgonagalput the hat away and had a seat to the right of Dumbledoor. Dumbledoor arose to make a quick greeting and a announcemnt. " Students, it is most wonderful to see you all here today. Eager to be here as well. I am Professor Dumbledoor, and I am very glad to have you all here. With that being said, please have a great time, but also remember to listen to your and any prefects. With that Fred and George Weasly, twins in their 5th year, tossed something at their older brother, a beaming Percy Weasly, readjusting his badge. Dumbledor continued, 'with that being said. Enjoy the food." and with a wave of his hand, a plentiful arisin of food of all kinds appeared, and the great hall filled with excited talk and chit chat everywhere.
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