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So much editing! ;A; /KEYSMASHsomesockMay 2 2010, 17:22:00 UTC
If you don't mind, I'd like to offer some advice and commentary (if you could call it that), but what I do not mean is to put you down or make you feel bad. You're actually a pretty good player, but you could do so much better
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Naw, I don't really mind. I'm a tad nervous right now that I'm going to be made fun of, but--I figure I'll live.
That's actually what I've been trying to do lately--both with the characterization and creating. I'll try harder, sorry.
I'm sorry I can't really...say much more, other than that I'll try and do all of that--and will ask people for help more. That's all I really can say, ha ha. I'm sorry. :/
Aaand, I'll get right to enabling that. /never knew how to before.
Uhh, and--I have no idea how to explain that, actually. Since it's something that Kalyn and I decided out of chat, I mean? I don't know how to explain that to you. :/ Sorry again that I don't know what to say, and that I haven't been very helpful.
No one's going to make fun of you, and you don't need to apologize. The purpose of this wasn't to put you on the spot, make you feel bad/paranoid or take the fun of the game from you.
Like I said, you're a pretty cool player, but it's these little things that concern (for lack of a better word) me as a reader. You're playing all these wonderful places rich in history, culture, and stereotypes and it's a little sad to see you hardly taking advantage of this. You're creative, of this I have no doubt, so don't be afraid to think outside the box - hell, outside the room, even. :)
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That's actually what I've been trying to do lately--both with the characterization and creating. I'll try harder, sorry.
I'm sorry I can't really...say much more, other than that I'll try and do all of that--and will ask people for help more. That's all I really can say, ha ha. I'm sorry. :/
Aaand, I'll get right to enabling that. /never knew how to before.
Uhh, and--I have no idea how to explain that, actually. Since it's something that Kalyn and I decided out of chat, I mean? I don't know how to explain that to you. :/ Sorry again that I don't know what to say, and that I haven't been very helpful.
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Like I said, you're a pretty cool player, but it's these little things that concern (for lack of a better word) me as a reader. You're playing all these wonderful places rich in history, culture, and stereotypes and it's a little sad to see you hardly taking advantage of this. You're creative, of this I have no doubt, so don't be afraid to think outside the box - hell, outside the room, even. :)
And, ahh, OK. Thank you.
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