Clue Haiku Challenge

[srsly_yes]

Howdy Campers

Comments

[rslhilson]

Insomnia lurks,
but the scruff against his cheek
helps sleep come back home.

(Diagnosis: insomnia - sekret woid! :D; location: home/implied bedroom, if that isn't too vague)

[barefootpuddles]

I like this. Especially the middle line. :)

[rslhilson]

Thank you! :)

[srsly_yes]

What sweet imagery you conjured up. :)

[rslhilson]

I thought about making it angsty, but it's hard to pass up Hilson snuggling opportunities :)

Also, your sample haikus were wonderful! I particularly liked the first one, and the idea of Sarah messing around with the inhaler...could make a really good full-length fic, methinks.

[srsly_yes]

If you are a cat owner then you know everything you own is free game. *strokes chin* Full length fic, eh? Haiku do make good prompts. Mine are up for grabs.

I thought about making it angsty...
--We accept remixed haiku too.

[damigella_314]

Yes, the middle line really gives a wonderful image - and at the same time a sensual (in the sense of senses, not sex) one. Wonderful use of so few syllables.

[rslhilson]

Thanks so much!

[menolly_au]

I'd sleep pretty well with House next to me too I think:) or maybe not, come to think of it:) Lovely!

[rslhilson]

Haha. Thank you!

[rslhilson]

Many thanks! :)