Clue Haiku Challenge

[srsly_yes]

Howdy Campers

Comments

[menolly_au]

I'm going to steal borrow Damigella's example and go for the double haiku because I didn't want to leave a cliffhanger :)

A gun shot echoes
blood on office carpet, fear
cane appears, safety.

Awake, ICU
pain clawing, tears form, need help
hands adjust drip, sleep.

[damigella_314]

You should have added a third one to explain who shot Wilson and why :).
And I love the idea that House's cane alone is a symbol of safety.
Lovely caring!house in the second haiku (well, he would know about pain problems).

[menolly_au]

It was an angry father whose child died and he blamed wilson - I just couldn't fit all of that in:)

[damigella_314]

It was an angry
father whose child had just died
and he blamed Wilson.

Thanks for explaining
our oncologist must fear
parents in mourning.

[srsly_yes]

Oh my! A whole story developed. Great job, you guys!

[menolly_au]

Thanks :) We're having fun with it :)

[menolly_au]

:) :) :)

Leaving hospital
A sudden noise, Wilson jumps
Blue eyes steady him

[damigella_314]

I have a flight to take, but I can't resist. The blue eyes steadying him killed me. And I felt a lack of dialog ;-).

"Forget that hotel,
stay with me." "Your couch, tonight?"
"My bed, forever."

[menolly_au]

Have a good flight )

Shadows in the dark
scare him. He turns seeking warmth
strong arms hold him. Sleep.

[rslhilson]

Agree with damigella - I love that House's cane represents safety to Wilson. Wonderful double haiku!

[menolly_au]

Thanks!

[srsly_yes]

Aw, House and Wilson's relationship shines through in your drabbles. Wonderful.

[barefootpuddles]

You have an entire story in your haikus!

I love the feeling of safety from just a glimpse of the cane. And the last word "sleep" being the second time that House provided comfort in his own way.

[menolly_au]

Thanks! These are quite fun:) Although I find counting difficult...lol

[menolly_au]

Thanks!