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Clue Haiku Challenge

Jul 01, 2011 07:27

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sin_of_pride July 2 2011, 01:27:55 UTC

Second (and longer) try, hopefully I didn't mess up the syllables.

Terrified, he cries when
hallucinations turn too
real to play pretend.

House refuses to
lock him away; meds help less
than someone caring.

(Diagnosis: schizophrenia, location: home)

srsly_yes July 2 2011, 02:17:18 UTC

The double haiku packs a lot of punch and is absolutely haunting. *wrings hands* I want to hug both guys.

sin_of_pride July 2 2011, 03:13:55 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad it worked for you. They do need a hug!

antiquixotic July 2 2011, 02:27:45 UTC

*Clutches chest* This packs quite a painful punch, in the very best possible way. Loved it!

sin_of_pride July 2 2011, 03:14:27 UTC

Thank you so much!

barefootpuddles July 2 2011, 02:58:23 UTC

I love these double haikus. So much story in such a little package!

sin_of_pride July 2 2011, 03:16:18 UTC

Thank you! I like the format too, it leaves much room for the imagination.

damigella_314 July 2 2011, 14:06:10 UTC

That was so heartwarming, even though schizophrenia is a harsh disease, but at list there's someone caring. Thank you for ignoring 7x23 and giving us this gem.

sin_of_pride July 2 2011, 17:39:16 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it :) I'm all for ignoring large chunks of season 7 to be honest.

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