RIP WIP Challenge

[deelaundry]

What's a summer camp without ghosts? This is the RIP WIP ("Rest in peace, works in progress") challenge: Take those fragments of sick!Wilson creations that have been haunting you with their unfinishedness and post them in comments here. Bury them, mourn them, and let them go.

Comments

[yarroway]

House and Wilson exit. Close up on Cuddy's face, angry and resigned…and thoughtful. She picks up the phone as we fade out

[brindlewolf]

"Foreman, annoyed: We know he has cancer.

House (writes the word ASSUMPTION on the whiteboard): We know making assumptions makes and ASS (circles word) out of U (circles letter) and U (doubles back to circle letter again). Stick to symptoms, facts, and observations. What do we know?

Foreman, in exact same tone as before: We know he has cancer."

I love your IC banter. This too will be an excellent story. <3

[yarroway]

Alas, this one has joined the choir invisible.

[sydpenguinbunny]

I like this! I would be curious to see how it ends :D

[yarroway]

I don't like admitting failure, but not admitting it won't get this fic written.

[rslhilson]

Cuddy: Foreman isn’t a fellow.

House: Neither is he (indicating Chase).

Hahaha, I loved this! Completely IC and so enjoyable to read. It's too bad we won't see it finihsed...*mourns*

[yarroway]

I think mourning was Dee's point. And I kind of am.

[menolly_au]

Oh, I love these two scenes, the dialogue is spot on, the snark is great, you have the Cuddy/House powerplay thing going on, this could easily be the start of an episode.

This in particular is harsh but soooo House

House: All presentations are somewhat atypical, and if you're going to have a child with a chronic, debilitating condition it's not all the worst thing in the world to have him die while he's still young and cute enough to at least get you some sympathy. (changing tone) So. Bowling?

[yarroway]

Yeah, too bad there was no 'there' there.

Thanks, it struck me as something he would say. It's not, I hasten to add, my own belief.