Comments | sid401k: Drabbles #81-100

sid401k

Drabbles #81-100

Oct 03, 2007 00:52

A Collection of Brokeback Drabbles - Nos. 81 through 100.
Pairing: Jack/Ennis (canon, no A/U in this batch)
Rating: Language, graphic M/M sex here and there
Disclaimer: Annie Proulx invented them, Diana Ossana and Larry McMurtry expanded them, Ang Lee guided them, and Heath Ledger and Jake Gyllenhaal interpreted them. I promise I’ll put them back when ( Read more... )

drabbles, brokeback

Comments 9

sweetje October 3 2007, 09:19:28 UTC

I would love it if you could elaborate on #88. That sounds like a good plot for a short story, or maybe a long story.

I laughed at #s 90 and 91. I love it when they get playful.

#96: I don't like KE's soon to be wife. She's a bitch.

#97: Ennis did all he could for his children. He loved them and sacrificed more than they would ever know for them.

#98: I hate the thought of killing animals, no matter what the reason. But I do understand Jack's POV on the loss of a life. After all, his life was lost long before he died.

#99: Ennis was wrong.

#100: At least they didn't compare lengths...or did they? ; )

I enjoyed all of your drabbles, but my favorite was Fear. Would you consider expanding on that one? : )
Debra

sid401k October 4 2007, 18:10:43 UTC

88. I thought so too!

90 and 91. AP describes them up on Brokeback as "laughing and snorting." She was referring to their sex, but I like to think of them having fun together in other ways, too.

96. It's a little bitty place, and they are about to be newlyweds. She just wants some privacy to be with her man. That said, deception and manipulation are not a great way to start out a marriage. I wonder whatever happened to them?

97. He wanted to love Alma, but all he could manage was affection. But he could love his daughters. I see him as having great capacity for love, almost all of which was deeply repressed during his childhood.

98. Why I need a beta. This was supposed to be Ennis' POV. So I've made a few changes, and--hopefully--it's a little clearer now.

99. But he wanted so much to be right.

100. Probably. But the age difference would mean that K.E.'s was almost certain to be bigger.

jennasts October 3 2007, 11:40:03 UTC

I really enjoyed all of these. You have a gift! Some evoked a really tight throat and hard swallowing: how wonderful to be able to do that in just 100 words!
Love,
Jenna

sid401k October 4 2007, 18:18:43 UTC

Praise from Jenna is praise indeed! Thank you for reading!

jacks_key October 3 2007, 12:21:32 UTC

Those were all wonderful!

sid401k October 4 2007, 18:21:26 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed them.

gothica_vanessa May 18 2009, 20:30:21 UTC

all caught up :)
can't belive i've been here for about a year and a half and just see those now !!!
i'm surely glad i found them, you bet :)
you are VERY talented :)
thanks
vanessa

hampshirerose May 18 2010, 20:57:08 UTC

I followed the link you posted on DCF and I am so glad I did. It has been a privelege to sit and read these in one sitting. I have only recently discovered drabbles and am blown away at the cleverness of them. It is incredible how much of a story,how much emotion can be conveyed with a mere 100 words. Rambling is easy - this format takes real understanding. Anyway I am glad I dropped by....

Rose