Exchange

Feb 13, 2012 19:46

Title: Exchange
Prompt: winter holiday/festival (R4C1)
Medium: fic - 1,166 words (exclusive of author’s notes)
Rating: G
Warnings: This is canon, so the future is not a happy one. The first three parts of the fic are just cute; enjoy! Stop after the pictures at the end of Part 3, and make up your own ending, if you like. Because Part 4 gets ( Read more... )

brokeback, challenge

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gwylliondream February 14 2012, 20:32:23 UTC
Oh, that was so touching, Sid. That last part gave me a tear- not easy to do these days!

Brilliant job!

Damn... I think I signed up for AU Bingo somewhere on LJ an year or so ago... oops!

XO

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sid401k February 15 2012, 09:18:45 UTC
Oops indeed. At my current rate of production, I calculate that my Schmoop Bingo card will be filled by November 2018.

So glad you enjoyed. I admit to a tear or two myself.

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gnashsang February 16 2012, 10:06:12 UTC
sid, this was the highlight of my valentine's day... for the last frikkin five years. seriously... so clever and well thought out, and the formatting!

i love that jack got a strawberry malt. ;)

thank for the entertainment, and for reminding us what brokeback is all about.

XOXOX <3 <3 <3

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sjmarv February 17 2012, 05:33:02 UTC
Ditto all this about content, but especially about formatting! Whew!

Thanks for a great read.

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morrobay1990 February 16 2012, 23:34:56 UTC
I just love this. I like the glimpse into their parellel lives...

Just great, thanks

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roby100 February 17 2012, 08:29:23 UTC
Sad but beautiful.
Usually I don't read canon but the pictures captured me and I read it.
Very well written.
A big hug
Roby

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Whatdsaya mean, "Niot perfect? sjowall1452 February 20 2012, 11:56:55 UTC
Thy ARE perfect

Isn't that one way to put the whole damn problem? Ennis would never give Jack a valentine, so Jack...

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kathan12 February 25 2012, 02:14:04 UTC
I wish they had sent those small valentine's day cards to each other.
It's just so sad.

kathy

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Well of COURSE I had read this--and commented. sjowall1452 June 10 2013, 07:51:55 UTC
Gave it the full literary treatment....and it's still real sweet.

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