Darkness Within

[sidhe1]

Another poem I wrote. I was depressed. What else is new?

I don't know how I cope
With thoughts in chaos
They are frightening me
And I still shudder
When my keen memory
Replays the bad things
Or perhaps it is false
Not accurate
But I may nontheless
Be struck with remorse
Over things that I think
Or feel or make up
Why should my very soul
Coerce me so
Making

Comments

[pearlwing]

As a person who can't write a poem for shit, I respect anyone who can...and this is seriously a good poem. Very emotive. And these lines are absolutely gorgeous (in a sad, depressing way >_<):

"It's ripping my thoughts apart
Turning them into art
For some dark thing that needs
Tastes of pain to survive"

Imagery is amazing really.

"Like a maggot that dines
On this sadness of mine"

I really like it sidhe, seriously...kudos to you! ^.^

[sidhe1]

Well, thank you! I don't like most of my poetry, I think it's shit, but I keep writing it anyway. I'm glad you liked this one. :)