Fic: Cradle (3/8)

Aug 03, 2010 21:05

Title: Cradle
Chapter: Damage (3/8)
Fandom: Tomb Raider: The Angel of Darkness
Pairing: Lara/Kurtis
Summary: After Egypt every day, every hour had felt like a gamble, like death was stalking her from the shadows. But now Lara knew that her greatest danger came from within, for two years of her life may have passed but she was still in love with the ( Read more... )

fic: cradle, tomb raider, fanfiction

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bslbunnie August 3 2010, 22:33:25 UTC
Hahaha! I knew it! I knew Kurtis’ powers would short-circuit on him at a crucial moment and jeopardise them! You made him far too arrogant and self-assured to allow their mission to have nothing go wrong- he certainly threw a spanner in the works! XD

I hope the whole concept of Kurtis ‘screwing things’ will come into play more throughout the subsequent chapters. There are some strong sexual desires radiating from both Lara and Kurtis, notably in their dialogue and body language; they both clearly want each other but are too proud to admit it. I predict that these sexual undertones coming will surface and develop quickly into something more fruitful and kinky ^_^

I hope that Kurtis’ suggestion of, “We can hide at my place," means that they get to do some imitate hiding beneath the bed sheets: their body’s closely entwined, all naked and sweaty...*Drools*

eagarly await another update! *hugs*

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sidhlairiel August 3 2010, 22:49:21 UTC
*hugs* Thank you so much for the review(s)! It took me all day to get this chapter edited so I really appreciate the detailed comments.

As for resolving the sexual tension? Well, you're just gonna have to wait and see...

*evil laughter*

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