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ninja007 May 16 2014, 04:09:22 UTC
Loved this. I really could feel Jack's anxiety.

Well done!!

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sidlj May 16 2014, 04:16:04 UTC
Watching this scene, he's so un-Jack-like, so obviously doubting his decisions and dreading bad news. I'm glad that came across!

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ninja007 May 16 2014, 04:40:23 UTC
The part where you wrote that Jack was feeling like he was going to throw up, I felt that.

Great writing!

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