Happy Birthday, melannen!

[siegeofangels]

A ficlet, for melannen on the occasion of her birthday. Happy birthday, best wishes, hope your day is full of wonderful things!

Title: Nonverbal
Fandom: SGA
Rating: G, genfic

Comments

[fatuorum]

Hee, this is adorable and spot-on. That parting line is perfect. *g*

[siegeofangels]

Thank you! Teyla has a great sense of humor sometimes.

[sundara]

Oh, really well done! The images were perfect.

[siegeofangels]

Thank you! This was one of those that I could see really clearly in my head; it was translating it into words that was the problem.

[shihadchick]

oh, this absolutely makes sense and it's very vivid, too. made me grin like mad while it all played out inside my head.

[Death glare,] Weir tells them both. [Death. Glare.]
I LOVED that bit because, well, yes. hee.

[siegeofangels]

(That's my favorite part, too.)

Thank you!

[ladyvyola]

The punctuation there was perfect.

[Death. Glare.]

::reads it again::

[broad smile]

[siegeofangels]

[grin]

It's Sheppard on the [Death] and Rodney on the [Glare] in my mind.

Thank you!

[skeddy_kat]

Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing it and letting me start the day with a smile.

[siegeofangels]

I'm so glad you like it! Thanks!

[reginabellatrix]

lol. Funny and totally perfect, especially the last line.

[siegeofangels]

Thank you! Teyla's a lot of fun sometimes.