Black Wolf Chapter 1 (Part B)

Feb 06, 2010 21:57



I was still standing there five minutes later when the living room door opened and mom came out.

“You okay sweetie?” she said.

I looked up at her. “Yeah…I’m fine.”

She looked at the phone, and then looked back at me. “How’s Taemin?”

“He’s alright… he’s moving soon. His dad got a new job in Paris. He’s setting up some kind of theater or something. They’ ( Read more... )

pairing: onew/key, author: s, !fanfic, rating: pg-13

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sigfy February 7 2010, 04:21:16 UTC
I hate that they cut it D:

How do i link it together? D:

TEACH ME SENSEI.
-bows-

Thanks :]

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sigfy February 7 2010, 22:10:35 UTC
Got it :D

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intoxicatedbrat February 7 2010, 06:58:27 UTC
Wow. This is... this... I LIKE THIS SO MUCH.
I love coming-of-age stories. They just get to me you know. Guhh I don't know how to say it. >.<

Loving the mystery and the portrayal of the different characters. Love love! Looking forward to more!

And if this is based off that book you mentioned, I'm definitely grabbing that book! :D :D

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sigfy February 7 2010, 22:20:09 UTC
LOL.
i like YOU so much.
:D
Omgoshness. I love them too. Its like i can relate, yes?
:]

:D
Thanks for the comment!

A lot of Kevin Brook's books are coming of age :]
Check him out :D
'Candy' by him is really good too.
:D

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sigfy February 7 2010, 22:20:37 UTC
LOL.
tyty! -bows-
:]

-hurries to update-
@-@
LOL.

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xxqod February 7 2010, 14:40:52 UTC
Ah! This!
The first part was already amazing
and now part B is even more captivating! :D

I love wolves! ^^
So I'll be sure to follow this! :D
Can't wait for Jinki to go out a bit more. Being at home all the time is also tiring =.=

Does he still meet up with Key though? :\
I know he doesn't really with the others, but Key holds a special place in his heart ^^

Oh, and not to forget: I like your style of writing! ^^
A LOT! :D
<3 ~~

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sigfy February 7 2010, 22:22:21 UTC
LOL.
Your comments really inspire me.
-happy tears-

LOL. i love wolves too.
they're so pretty. :]

Oh i knowwww. -stares at mess piling up from being at home so much- :/

maybe~! :D
Yes, key defenitely holds a special place in his heart.

:D
Thanks again!
<3

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saikocchi February 8 2010, 05:18:50 UTC
achmeingott 2nd time! :O

i can't friggin believe i skipped this part D:< bad reader sai, bad reader!! (>o<)

yeah uhm anyway, 2min are twins?? lol i can't seem to imagine that, it juss makes me think of..stuff X3 the incestuous kind..coz yknow..*coughcough*2min is 2min smexy fluffy cuteness-overload love*coughcough* then you made them twins XD

so..i'm now more intrigued than ever :3 so key was also part of their lil circle of friends :o and he's the only one who's had "connection" only and ONLY with onew :D amiright?? :D

i love love L♥VE long chapters so yay for long chapters :D :D :D

ps. omg nekkid onew waiting for key to show up in key's front yard at a humid night is juss hawt *0* LOL
i shall continue reading and wait for KiKi smexiness X3 puppy love is okei for now lol ohemgee first time i'd actually be reading ontae smexy stuffs XD
so yeah, update soon!! ^0^ soree for teh long comment ^^;;

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sigfy February 8 2010, 23:47:48 UTC
LOL wb! :D

LOL. -grabs you from hurting yourself- NO. THINK OF ALL THE FANFICS YOU WON'T BE ABLE TO READ ANYMORE.
:]

LOL. -high five incest fan-
:D

Yes'm yous be right. :D

Oh my lord, i absolutely love reading long fanfics too! :]

LOLOLOL.
at first. i was like.
should i give him SOMETHING to wear?
nawww.
:D

Np, i love long comments.
makes me feel loved.
:]
~<3

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saikocchi February 9 2010, 02:12:21 UTC
(/'O')/-i'm being graaaabbed- XD

w00h00 incest fans XD -hi five!- still, cannot imagine 2min being twins lol

weeee~long fanfics :D that's why i absolutely cannot understand why authors would apologize for writing a long chapter/fic :/ unless it's sposed to be a drabble lol

yesh~naked!onew is better XDD

yay for long comments too ^0^
-hugs yoo- you are loved :D

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sigfy February 9 2010, 02:22:33 UTC
LOL. Your smiley looks like its gonna be raped.
._. what.
:D

LOL. now that i think about it. neither can i.
but.
ONWARDS with the plot.
:D

i understand them complaining though.
cuz lord what that a pain in the fingers.
D:
-finger cramp-
LOL. jpjp.

:] No clothes > clothes.

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