Black Wolf (Chapter 2) Part B

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There were other bad times with Eunhyuk, too. And it wasn’t just me and Key who suffered, either. Eunhyuk had it in for all of us- Minho, Taemin, Jonghyun…anyone who was smaller than him, basically. Smaller of different. Weaker or younger…whatever. I’m sure you know what it is. I mean, we all have our own Eunhyuk’s when we were ten years old, right

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[xxqod]

I'mma take a spot.
Don't have much time to read so I'll read this later, but I loved the first chapter so much, I can't wait to read more. <3

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LOL.
-saves spot for you-

Oh, your comment made my day. :]

[xxqod]

OMG!!!

Jonghyun, where do you think you going hanging out with Eunhyuk?!

And I love Key, he's so mysterious, but I can't help but feel his parents abuse him if he doesn't listen.

And Jinki is so nice, really nice.

Gawdsss I love Black Wolf!!! XD
OMG! I hope nothing serious happens when they go there! :O
(Probably will)

Ah, Taemin is kinda selfish? because he wants Onew back, but can't?
I feel Kibum loves Jinki, but the other three (Taemin, Minho and Jonghyun) said something to him to make him stay away from Jinki...

Gawds.
And you updated again?
I thought/
So I'll go read that chapter later :D

I like your writing ^^ , it's very readable, and not too complicated ^^
<3 ~~

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LOL.
i feel like.
i made his character too much of a coward.
:/
OH WELLS :D

But still abuse is bad...but just trying to show his background here :]

Cuz. i have a weak spot for onew.
i really do D:

LOL. maybe.

D: Its like you already read my whole script!
-cries-
LOL.
close but no cigar. :d

LOL. see. i don't know many bigs words.
LOL.

[allaboutm]

It's like 2am in my country and i'm here; reading your oh-so-interesting fiction *o*

The more i read, the more i want to know about this "meeting" and their past blah blah blah ...

Jinki's character is really appealing, i like it. And Kibum seems really weird but in a good way (or not ... i don't really know yet, we'll see, right?)

I'm looking forward the next chapt (:

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D:
2am? Go sleep!
Its only 8:30 here :D

LOL i wrote more but..
my laptop reset.
so i kinda...LOL i'll try and get it up this weekend :]

Yes. we shall see >:3

Thanks for the comment! <3

[njrv16]

Uhhhh I like Kibum's personality a lot, it's different. It's a nice change
I like the ending of this one can't wait to know what happens next ;D

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I like YOUR personality a lot :D
-hinthintnudgenudge-
LOL.

But yeah i wanted to steer away from key always being the diva.
:P

Working on it~ :D

[wykedpanda]

Oh Mai Gawd. I'm hooked. I love your writing style, where you write in Onew's point of view and everything just flows. It's so realistic, to the point of being unnerving really. And I'm adoring your characterization of Key so far. As much as I love the typical diva Key, this new side of him is fresh and intriguing. MOAR! keke Onew's characterization is wonderful as well. He's very simple, but so complex in his mindset...Like, the story is from his point of view, but I still feel like I barely know him at all.

And, then Eunhyuk. Gawd, I love suju (so props for you bringing them in :D) but, he is such a bully here. Sigh~ And the black wolf... O___O He doesn't seem ...real. I don't know how to describe it...like it exists, but its behavior, its words...it's eerie in an intriguing yet disturbing way <

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Its you! :D
LOL.

-nods- Mhmm mhmm i wanted to try something as a first prospective...i mean.
Onkey was on my mind...
and i absolutely adore onew.
so wallah! :D
I read too much Key-is-a-diva fanfics. and they just got so...cliche...you know? so. tried to twist it :3

DW. Eunhyuk WILL play a big role in this.
:D
-pats head-

i like the wolf too.
its my personal favorite character.
:D shh.

[wykedpanda]

I agree. They become a little cliche, but I still adore diva Key. :D

ohhh~~ I'm so excited!!! :DDD Hehe, I don't really know much about the wolf yet. But when I do, I'll let you know what I think of him. Right now, I'm convinced he's like some animal spirit trying to bring Key and Onew together :D keke

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I do too! i love it in humor.
but humor..
just doesn't work for me.
LOL.

Maybe he IS.
DUN DUN DUN.

[wykedpanda]

Really? Huh, if I catch any humor in the "Black Wolf" series, I win! keke

oh my. the suspense~~~ *trembles in excitement*

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NO D:
-admits defeat-