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sigmund_88

Chapter III

Mar 11, 2008 13:15

Title: Shadow and Sunshine
Pairing: J/B, some E/B
Rating: PG-13
Summary: On their honeymoon, Bella is torn away from Edward when they are attacked by a strange group. Although Bella survives, she ends up stranded at a mysterious school with no memory of her prior life. As her new life begins to fall apart at the seams, Bella must piece ( Read more... )

shadow and sunshine, fanfiction

Comments 17

midget_size March 11 2008, 22:51:42 UTC

Ooh! Oh yay. Can't wait for them to get to Forks and Bella and Jacob to find each other and *sigh* You know.

sigmund_88 March 12 2008, 17:23:58 UTC

Yeah, I had to fight the urge to plop everybody in Forks right away. ;) Thank you for reading!

lambbaby March 11 2008, 23:34:26 UTC

Yes! Bella is headed home!(not that she knows that but still.) I like that you're giving us an actual plot and reason for her going back to Forks.

And OMG! Poor Jacob. I love that he's determined to find her. I wonder though how soon after her arrival in Forks will they be meeting up?

I can't wait for the next chapter.

sigmund_88 March 12 2008, 17:28:58 UTC

Thank you! And yes, I can't help but feel sorry for all the people Bella left behind when she disappeared. Jake is an especially interesting angle since he's got more inner conflict to deal with. Hopefully the next chapter will be posted by the end of the week... I'm aiming for sometime Friday, but it depends on when I can find time for revision.

iheartdougie March 12 2008, 00:28:40 UTC

I can't wait to see what will happen when they get to forks! I have a quick question though...is the story over all gonna be e/b or j/b?

sigmund_88 March 12 2008, 17:32:47 UTC

Thanks! And that's actually kind of a tricky question. I know that I personally tend to lean more towards the J/B end of the spectrum, but also want to keep everyone in character as much as possible, and Edward is an important dynamic in Bella's life. So I guess the short answer would be that I'm not planning on doing away with anyone, but there will most likely be a J/B slant to the story as it progresses.

I hope I haven't scared you away, but understand either way. :) Thank you for reading so far!

auzzyfreak March 23 2008, 03:29:13 UTC

oh my goodness, I did NOT see the Forks placement coming, but it makes me SO THRILLED! *minor excitement explosion as to what will happen next*

beckaswanwise April 6 2008, 20:16:54 UTC

i totally LOVE that they will be going to forks, omg, the FLASHBACKS she'll probably have!