Comments | sigmund_88: Chapter IV

sigmund_88

Chapter IV

Mar 16, 2008 19:48

Title: Shadow and Sunshine
Pairing: J/B, some E/B
Rating: PG-13
Summary: On their honeymoon, Bella is torn away from Edward when they are attacked by a strange group. Although Bella survives, she ends up stranded at a mysterious school with no memory of her prior life. As her new life begins to fall apart at the seams, Bella must piece ( Read more... )

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sigmund_88 March 17 2008, 02:29:37 UTC

Thank you! :) And actually, one of the later chapters addresses how long Bella has been missing. It doesn't ruin any future plot points though, so I don't see any problem in saying that it's been a few months since Bella's wedding to Edward (about six is what I'm assuming so far, but that might end up changing). The scenes with Jacob and Edward don't necessarily have to be seen as happening simultaneously with Bella's, since really her scenes are the focus of the plot. I just couldn't resist throwing in some of the other characters.

Also, Jacob Black is by far my favorite character of the series. ;) He'll definitely continue to make regular appearances as this progresses.

__dittany March 17 2008, 01:56:16 UTC

YAY! I was hoping you'd update this soon. ^.^
I absolutely love it.

sigmund_88 March 17 2008, 02:23:47 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

savannahjan March 17 2008, 14:05:13 UTC

*squee* They are there!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens!

sigmund_88 March 18 2008, 18:58:41 UTC

Hehe. I know! Now that they're actually in Forks (or right outside of it, I suppose) I can't wait to bring in more of the actual characters. :)

ccait March 17 2008, 19:42:49 UTC

yay!
i love it! :)

i can't wait to read what happens next :D

sigmund_88 March 18 2008, 18:59:18 UTC

Thanks! :)

skidoomad March 18 2008, 13:46:50 UTC

This is just SOOOO good.I really can't wait until the next chapter!I just wanted to know , how long more it will take you to post it.Are you almost done?This is just so addicting , i cant wait to see what happens and how Bella will get her memory back.

Jacob Black is also my favorite character in this , i almost cried at his parts!!!

sigmund_88 March 18 2008, 19:01:00 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I usually try to be several chapters ahead of what I'm posting so that I'm able to go back and revise later. I'll do my best to get the next chapter posted tomorrow.

And I'm really happy to hear that you like the parts with Jacob. Those are my favorite to write. :D