Chapter VI

Mar 24, 2008 13:50



Title: Shadow and Sunshine
Pairing: J/B, some E/B
Rating: PG-13
Summary: On their honeymoon, Bella is torn away from Edward when they are attacked by a strange group.  Although Bella survives, she ends up stranded at a mysterious school with no memory of her prior life. As her new life begins to fall apart at the seams, Bella must piece ( Read more... )

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savannahjan March 24 2008, 19:22:07 UTC
Aw man! Edward has to ruin everything!!!!! *pout*

I can't wait to see the Jacob/Bella reunion! *squee*

Loved it. Thanks for writing!

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sigmund_88 March 25 2008, 01:42:56 UTC
Haha, I'm glad you liked it!

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twilighttwitch March 24 2008, 19:23:42 UTC
*squee*

This made me smile. I could feel the build up as Bella left her friends and stumbled straight into Charlie. I wondered... when she had to bow her head against the wind if there wasn't something to that... if Edward wouldn't be closeby and pop in to investigate.

But Edward's line... it was perfectly executed. I mean... so... Edwardy. :D for lack of better definition.

I'll be excited to see the next chapter, but I understand your dilemma. I have several school things to do this week and I still want to write... I'm in the midst of writing an original... and that's all I think about. :)

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twilighttwitch March 25 2008, 01:40:59 UTC
I saw your disclaimer and thought it only fair to comment. As much as I love Edward's dramatic entrance, I could see this as a road paved for Jacob.

But I wonder, if she's repulsed by Edward, will she be repulsed by Jacob as well... when she learns the truth?

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sigmund_88 March 25 2008, 02:06:43 UTC
Well, my rationale behind Bella's reaction to Edward is more that she currently believes she was rescued *from* vampires. I do tend to lean more towards the J/B end of the spectrum, but I don't dislike Edward by any means.

I don't think it's giving away too much by saying that Bella's discomfort stems more from the fact that she doesn't currently know he isn't of the human-killing variety. :)

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sigmund_88 March 25 2008, 01:44:00 UTC
Yeah, sadly real life is gradually getting in the way of more fun things. ;) And that's exciting about working on your original piece! I know those have a tendency to suck me in when the inspiration hits.

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anonymous March 24 2008, 21:08:03 UTC
how the hell is that possible?! [PPS]
>:(

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asthenia March 24 2008, 22:07:18 UTC
TRUE!

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jellybabie_331 March 24 2008, 20:49:57 UTC
I love both Jacob and Edward,,, can't she have both!!! Love love love this chapter.... I want more!!!!

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sigmund_88 March 25 2008, 01:47:08 UTC
They *do* both have good points. :) Thanks for reading!

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ccait March 24 2008, 20:56:09 UTC
it keeps getting better and better!
eep!
i can't wait to see what Jake does!

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sigmund_88 March 25 2008, 01:48:05 UTC
Hehe, thanks!

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