Comments | sigmund_88: Chapter VIII

sigmund_88

Chapter VIII

Apr 05, 2008 11:01

Title: Shadow and Sunshine
Pairing: J/B, some E/B
Rating: PG-13
Summary: On their honeymoon, Bella is torn away from Edward when they are attacked by a strange group. Although Bella survives, she ends up stranded at a mysterious school with no memory of her prior life. As her new life begins to fall apart at the seams, Bella must piece ( Read more... )

shadow and sunshine, fanfiction

Comments 14

__dittany April 5 2008, 17:23:42 UTC

*squee*
This is getting so good.
I really like it, especially because she's slowly moving over to the Jacob side of things!

He smiled faintly. “You wouldn’t say that if you remembered me.”
Nyah hahaa I love Jacob.

auzzyfreak April 6 2008, 00:50:32 UTC

that line was SO Jacob. Seriously, it feels like you got his character dead on with that sentence.
And haha, I love Jacob too

sigmund_88 April 8 2008, 18:22:24 UTC

Thank you! Jacob is such a good guy and a fun character to write. I'm glad you both liked it. :)

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sigmund_88 April 8 2008, 18:24:39 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad to hear that you're enjoying it so far. And haha, one of the reasons I put that scene in was because I thought Bella's reaction the first time was a little bizarre as well. :D

skidoomad April 5 2008, 17:54:42 UTC

Hehe im starting to think about the meeting Jacob said about Sam and Quil going to...im not sure if this is right or not, but i think it might be with Ben.
I laughed at Bella's reaction there with Edward.Everything is perfect!

<3 Jacobb....

sigmund_88 April 8 2008, 18:25:43 UTC

Thank you :) I'm glad to hear that, one of the things I always try to pay attention to is making sure everyone's in character as much as possible.

OMG anonymous April 6 2008, 18:20:20 UTC

okay so i need a chapter 9 now not later not tomarow NOW okay so this is imntresting but i like edward there should be ore edward i dont think he would act like that if he just found her after es months same with jake.

Re: OMG sigmund_88 April 8 2008, 18:29:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it so far. And don't worry, Edward isn't gone from the story. :)

beckaswanwise April 6 2008, 20:42:09 UTC

ooooh!! its getting goood! i love jacob. i just thought of something though. theres a ben in the books. hes angelas boyfriend

sigmund_88 April 8 2008, 18:32:01 UTC

Thank you! And haha, I actually remembered that after I'd gotten pretty far in the story. I'm not planning on bringing Angela's boyfriend into the story, though, so it shouldn't be a problem. :)