J/B oneshot

[sigmund_88]

In order to distract from and apologize for the fact that the next chapter of Shadow and Sunshine isn't ready yet, I'm posting this J/B oneshot I wrote a few weeks ago. It takes place after Eclipse, and has lyrics from Paramore's "We Are Broken".

This was mostly me trying to experiment with a different style of writing, so comments and concrit

Comments

[leonhart_17]

awesome job! i love it!

[havens]

Aw, how pretty.

That's my favorite Paramore song. heh

[seeyouupside]

That was super pur-deeeee. :)
Excellent work. It made me smile.

[Its such a sunny day here, it makes me think of Jake, "the sun."]
♥

[ophelietta]

Beautiful. You've got a great hold on Bella's and Jake's voices - and having Bella's thoughts scattered about in italics worked for me, since she's such a conflicted character who doesn't even know her mind half the time. Very nice. :D

[__dittany]

*love*
I like the kiss, because there aren't enough J/B kisses in canon.
YAYZ!

I can feel his warm hands burning my skin through the material of my shirt, and smile against his shoulder. (All the best things in life can be healed.)